I absolutely love this story, I just discovered it today and I’m absolutely hooked. I can’t wait for more:) you’re an amazing writer

Yaaassss an update!

I read this a while back but I’m glad I got alerted for the new chapter in my email! I ended up re-reading the whole thing just to refresh my memory and man, it’s still so great the second time!

Really really in love with the slow build to this whole story and the way you characterized them. It makes you question whether Tom kills because he’s just really messed up or if he doesn’t actually believe there’s anything wrong in killing someone - and in a way, you can’t fault a person for acting on their honest beliefs. I also really like that there something “inherently” bad about Hermione that she’s trying to fight, and I think that Tom’s assumptions about how they “belong” aren’t entirely wrong. For any “good” person, they wouldn’t struggle so much to do what is right; or even if there were temptations and rage, an immediate response isn’t murder. He’s definitely a huge influence on that, given she never had murderous thoughts before he came into her life, but I think that they may have just been dormant.

Also, maaaaan, the tension. I don’t care if some people think it’s weird cause of the age difference or their family situation - if you can build that sort of chemistry given those limitation, and make is such that we’re actually rooting for them to get together, I truly applaud you!

Can’t wait for the next chapter! Hope you find more time and inspiration to update sooner - although we’ll be patient regardless - because I’m really hooked to this story! :) happy writing!

I'm hooked. Your writing is incredible :)

I can't believe how happy a notification about a story could make me! This got me all excited. Umbridge is really an opportunistic bitch and i don't see my feelings about her character any time soon! About the needles though..does she torture the poor babes or experiment on them? My head conjured several scenarios where she's this evil sadistic witch. Ahhh thank you so much for updating!

Wow. Totally with the wait! This was such a fantastic chapter in an already amazing story. Thank you

So that was pretty incredible

I'M SO FRIGGIN HAPPY YOU UPDATED! As always i loved the chapter please update soon.

Did I scream when I got the update notification? Yes I did. Hello! What a beautiful chapter. I am happy to say I kinda knew Umbridge was the one that had to go, she’s just awful. And those cats? I don’t believe she’s saving them at all. Were I a cat I’d rather be stray lol. Tom is the absolute devil, I love how she’s slowly confiding more and more to him. Her mother knows next to nothing. It really shows how his manipulation is taking hold and he’s corrupting her by having her deal with her thoughts all day long. I believe anyone would have murderous thoughts after what Umbridge did to her. Fact is, most would try a different course of action..but her, with Tom whispering in her hear...how can she not give in? Oh I love this fic so much. I wonder how they’ll do it! Thank you so much for the update, I love youuu xx

Another brilliant chapter! I’m so looking forward to the next one

I'm so happy you updated!

I can't wait to read Umbridge faith, stupid old toad!

Quote of the day: “Umbridge was, pardon the pun, taking umbrage with her attitude.”

I’m so happy you’ve made an update! How is it that you make this so eloquent and beautiful?
Can’t wait for the next update:))

Fantastic! I seriously can’t wait for the next chapter!

Yassss. Very nice terèse requin vibes I'm getting. Absolutely love it!

This keeps getting better and better!

Life is a little bit closer to being complete with each chapter you post