Reviews for This Tangle of Thorns |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is absolutely stunning. Honestly I'm floored by your beautiful prose- its like poetry, and I want to memorise the words and keep them in my head. And the characterization! This might be the most divine Tom ive encountered. Hes so sinful, and the little mannerisms that build up to turn him into a truly frightening force for Hermione to contend with. I genuinely fear for her, although she is more than capable of handling herself. Very well done! Thank you for taking the time to write it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No words. I dug in weary of the underage warning and here i am at the end yearning for more. This is such an amazing read that it took a lot for me to put it down (well mostly chores got in the way). I am so looking forward to read more and to see how you would continue this. Try as i may, i could not guess what happens next. Ah, this was delightfully refreshing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh so much mind games i can't keep up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry there was such a huge gap on my review but this just had me reading obsessively that i can't seem to stop and compose words that could aptly describe how i feel about every chapters. Let me try though. I feel curious, disturbed but utterly fascinated. Does it even make any sense? No? There's really not much else i could use to describe it then. This is a brilliant piece of work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm dying here. What in heaven's name is he after? So bloody curious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not gonna lie, there's no grand evil gesture YET but this Tom freaks me out and i love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *gasp* that imagery is creepy as fuck. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay. That's an interesting start. I'm afraid to actually read an underage fic but this came highly recommended. The first chapter pulled me in and i am looking forward to reading some more. |
![]() ![]() It would be nice if other characters appeared too. Like Harry, Ron and Lavender or Luna. Perhaps Harmione too? Through I wouldn't like Harry being killed. Guess it's gonna be Ron then. xD I love tomione and their dynamic is interesting BUT I want Hermione to end up being happy. So I pray she'll find a boy who loves her and DOESN'T die. (preferable Harry or Draco) And I hope she can tell him what happens at home and they'll figure out a plan. Btw is it possible that one of Tom's victims is Lily and Harry searches for the murderer? |
![]() ![]() An absolutely great story! I do so hope you think about writing more Tomione stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you, my friend, have a gift. Not everyone can write this kind of story |
![]() ![]() ![]() woah, I don't think my life will ever be the same. It's so dark and beautiful, scary af. |
![]() ![]() brilliant ! this chapter was brutal |
![]() ![]() ![]() Initially, I was reluctant to read a story based on Lolita, never read the book, but not a fan of the subject matter. But the way you've written this, Tom being pretty dark and a serial killer, for some reason makes this less disturbing. Maybe I just love Tom...that's why. Anyway can't wait for your next update :) |
![]() ![]() It's the night before my ap exam, and I'm here rereading this; I love it! |