Your writing technique is so inspiring.

Yaaaasss here's to more frequent updates! This is my favourite Tomione fic ever! You are incredible

Okay but the fact that she's plotting for Tom to get caught hurting Umbridge has just reiterated to me why this story is so brilliant. I can't wait to see what happens, it's so intense and mysterious and the way you write is fucking phenomenal. Seriously cannot wait for an update!

I don’t want Tom to die even those he’s horrible and disgusting

Ahhhhhh this is just so addictive! The way you write is beautiful and clever and you are clearly a master of your craft so please don't ever stop writing. I can't wait to see how this unfolds! Love both of their characters and the slow development of his grooming on her and her resistance to it - it's simply amazing storytelling.

What an erudite prose you have here. You're an incredible writer, your characterization and narration is so well done! I love the way he's grooming her. I mean I hate it but it's so authentic the way he plays her, imo. This story is honest, disgusting, funny, depraved, thoughtful and self-realized (and all other adjectives I can think of lol). Great job, cannot wait to read more.

Wow. I think all I can say is wow. This story has completely blown me away. The back and forth between Hermione and Tom; the consistency and purpose in your choice of metaphors, details, et cetera; the absolute VIVIDNESS in each scene; it all adds up to this grotesquely riveting story and I CANNOT. LOOK. AWAY. dude! I’d chop off my dominant arm for the ability to weave words as you do. I’ve read many splendid fanfics between these two characters, yet this is the first I’ve actually HAD to comment on (because wow!). Patiently yet eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Xx

Omg so happy to find this updated! With yet again another amazing chapter!

That’s incredibly smart! Loved this piece, so happy that you’re back 3

Such an amazing chapter, I'm loving the development between the two and am very intrigued to see what will happen

Incredible, as ever, I am so glad you updated! Some of the chapters might seem a bit filler-y but actually I think they're necessary because every detail you put in helps to establish the slow, sly course of manipulation. Can't wait for a hopefully more speedy update!

This is one of the best fanfics I’ve EVER read (and I’ve read so many). The characterisation, plot line and just everything are so so amazing I have no words! I really hope you write more fics with this ship. I don’t know why, but I could easily see this being made into a film.

You’re such a great author and I’m really looking forward to your next update!

Fantastic! Keep it coming

your words are always so haunting. i don't know how to describe it, but the way you write is unlike any other author i've ever read before, and i always come away from it mildly unnerved but craving more. i'm excited to find out what happens to umbridge and if hermione can get tom caught

Ur writing is exceptionally beautiful. I hope u beat ur writer's block, I'm excited for the rest of the story