Forgot your password?... wow

-hayabusa girl

Hello just to clarify that I will not continue this story because well I uh forgot my password.

ok

NOO NO WAY NO WAY NI WAY HOW CIUKD YOU!?

You seriously suck at this. Please, stop.

Love it

Good to see that you are continuing this can't wait for more

This story.

It's bad, it's genuinely *bad*.

There is barely any characterization, the writing is non-existent, all the characters act out of character and have nothing to say, all action is conveyed through asterisk play, the jokes are cringeworthy or TFS repeats at best and terrible at worst, and the worst part, in my opinion, is that it just has nothing to tell.

There is nothing interesting going on, this story just has no life to it. It's just retelling the same FemGoku treads that have been already explored many times before and in a much better act of writing.

There is a LOT of work needed here to raise this story from garbage tier.

Oh you watched that yeah db super really surprises me I was soooooo surprised and super mad(ha pun) and I like this story pretty good and funny

ok the last part was funny

I like it

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