Soo is this the end? I hope not

Hope another chapter comes soon

I wonder how many actual critiques for the lack of flow and sheer edge in this fic you've deleted to soothe your ego?

this is an amazing story i love the plot and cant wait to see where it ends up already a great read

Lmao

What sort of mental gymnastics do they go through to consider those words as "lies"?

Also, Erza's logic is stupid. Being willing to kill Hitler doesn't mean that you want to gun down orphans or something.

Should've gotten Erza arrested for assault and attempted kidnapping

Although I do like this fic, it feels more like a long summary rather than an actual story.

honestly only problem I have with this story is the minor Grammer errors it just sounds weird and I have to take a bit to figure it out

bit of a dick move to have a "important" message chapter tbh

heh
I can totally see the punk Gabrielle being a extremely potty mouthed powerbottom with Natsu
it's something I can't wait to see

Brooooo the summary looks cool and you already got me hooked when i saw overlord since im a believer (lol) of the religion of AINZ SAMA but really hope this story aint dead since the premise looks cool

a wood flavour Dragon Slayer and an Water flavour Dragon Slayer would be interesting
also
regarding Natsu's abilities, him being a demon dragon slayer, shouldn't he be able to feed on demon magic like he can fire magic?

if I am not way too late to vote
my vote is on Rogue being female! in honour of a famous shapeshifting redhead

damn that was smooth
an in story reason (one that makes sense, sounds in character and feels reasonable) for Natsu not referring to acnologia as either Male or Female! one that not only leaves you a seed for if you decide to gender swap him later and not have Natsu be surprised, but also makes sense considering the common misgendering of Zeref in this fic's reality!
you brilliant fucker!

I'll be honest
I really dislike Rogue and Sting
at the start it made sense
with Natsu Wendy and Gajeel they were taught by dragons with the weird time travel plan
while Laxus was a "modern day" Dragon slayer, who got his magic from a lacrima (also, wish there were more "modern day" lacrima made Dragon Slayers)
they all have elemental powers and are the start of a theme
but then
tada~ introducing two brand new never before seen dragon slayers!
who both believe they killed their dragons! (but that's not true because it'd require the writer to do something different with the plot instead of having pretty much all dragon slayers share a kinda dumb backstory)
and instead of elemental powers they are shadow and light dragon slayers!
they also are pretty fucking useless considering *Shadow* and *Light* Dragon Slayers!
And they have rockstar names! yay!

I really really disliked that