Honestly, I was thinking that your Blake and Jaune dynamic is sooooo interesting. I think them lyning to each other's faces and trying to be kind to each other in spite of that is top tier. Once I finish this series I think I will hunt for some knightshade by you. Soo good.

bitchy? BITCHY? for what, being afraid for her own life? for not assuming Blake is some perfect saint just because she's one of the main characters? the fuck are you talking about, Mallobaude? if anything, it's everyone around her that's acting unreasonably!

Never mind that last comment. I accidentally posted it before I finished.

I see Atlas a a pre-WW2 Germany, too. It also seems to be the least

This is one of the most enjoyable RWBY fanfictions out there. Seeing how Jaune and Weiss grew to care for one another was really satisfying even if it took quite a while to get there. I feel like I really understood their feelings for one another at the end.

I'm quite sad that it's over. You know you've done something right when you leave people wanting for more.

Oh well, back to The Men From Onyx I suppose.

Loved this chapter and Weiss dealing with loss of control and rampant emotions and calming down thanks to RY

Finallllllllllly!

Like how you demonstrate that realistically just wanting friendship isn't sufficient to HAVE a friendship ongoing, there is an awkward phase of them getting into a comfortable rhythm doing friend things. Also weiss just being so awkward at friend things, as well as the zwei and dad jokes bit was hilarious

Well glad to see truths finally out and jaune knows why she really approached him. Poor guy. His self confidence and faith that someone believed in him was just removed. It’s like if canon jaune found out pyrrH was just treating him as a pity project because she bet that she could make even a dunce look good

Well guess a Bunch of canon just got rolled sideways thanks to winter

Neo is still out there though as are team evil

I love the fact penny is teaching Weiss about how white lies aren’t evil even if they are hurtful

While she’s lying to her right there lol

Really good chapter. I like that jaunes managed to tell her the truth but also that yang and ruby know and accept him and he’s getting some real self confidence

I wonder which secret comes first. Jaune lhing about his transcripts to Weiss or Weiss lying about why she’s using jaune and training

Weiss queen is melting!

I like how Weiss is struggling with her guilt but maturing enough to break out of her comfort zone. Also inb4 foreshadowing that jaunes siren school thing will be unveiled as fake via winter.

Love the more varied characterizations were getting og jaune and Weiss and the Weiss ruby convo along with jaune and Pyrrha finally having a real interaction