I think is rather of Yang and Ruby unreasonable to expect that Weiss should just go look after a "White Fang member" speacily after she just opened up to them about how they traumatized her.

Just binged this... And it's finally paying off!

jolly good show

good show jolly good show

LETS GOOOO

Now we just need a rated M version.

that's very sweet. Nice story.

I just wanna run Jaune through sòooo fucking bad.

That was a great concept for a story, especially with the letters. The writing was coherent, even if it could have used a bit of proofreading. In my inconsequential opinion Weiss and Juane were both very much in character throughout the narrative, to the point that the realistic development of their relationship was portrayed so well that I could easily believe it actually happening. As satisfying as it was to read about the two of them, Winter and Yang kind of stole the show with their sisterly ways. I really enjoyed reading the whole thing, thank you for posting such a wonderful story.

Experiencing the feeling of being watched even if you know your alone is a human instinct and not because of Aura. I think it’s apart if the Gut Feeling. The conscious mind can’t process as much information at once compared to the subconscious or something. Basically our brain notices something that we don’t. Like in the case of the Emerald Forest a subtle glint from a camera or something.

Well the trait of blue eyes is originally from around Scandinavia or something. I think.

I think Jaune has some sense for tactics (even though it may be basic) but he’s definitely crappy at fighting.

Honestly, I was thinking that your Blake and Jaune dynamic is sooooo interesting. I think them lyning to each other's faces and trying to be kind to each other in spite of that is top tier. Once I finish this series I think I will hunt for some knightshade by you. Soo good.

bitchy? BITCHY? for what, being afraid for her own life? for not assuming Blake is some perfect saint just because she's one of the main characters? the fuck are you talking about, Mallobaude? if anything, it's everyone around her that's acting unreasonably!

Never mind that last comment. I accidentally posted it before I finished.