"There were three things in life she could count on... her sister to have her back."
this is so pre v9

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Good chapter

It's hard to believe this finished 7 years ago.
I didn't even know about White Knight back then, nor did I care for it.

You have completely changed my mind, and all I can think about is how happy I am just reading this story to completion. Thank you so much

GYAAH! So cute together.

This is not a review, sorry not sorry.

Zweiss supremacy!

Zwei and Weiss interactions must have fluff/comfort tags added to it!

While I like White Knight, I always felt like there was something beautiful about an intense friendship too. If the story ended here, I wouldn't be disappointed.

It reminds me of how Rukia and Ichigo have such a close bond, and the fact they they never saw each other romantically made it better IMHO.

I still hope for them being together (and I think they do by ch 30), but you wrote such a beautiful bond between the two; that the journey was worth it just as much as the ending.

Oh and sorry for Bleach spoilers

Lesss go! Wingmen Winter ftw!

The surprising thing is, never once had I thought you had written any of these characters to be out of character. They all nearly fit into how I'd expect them to act within your story.

Winter being the best wingmen is supposed to be super OOC, but I guess for a mastermind like you, that's just not the case.

I don't get to see many fanfic where she's a major character sadly. I always thought she'd pair well with Qrow, but then I remembered how badly she reacted to Qrow being a drunk. I never connected the dots until I saw how Willow Schnee was wallowing in her sadness getting drunk everyday. Yeah, I'd think she would hate Qrow too until he decided to go sober.

Anyways, It's nice to know that Jaune isn't immediately forgiving of Weiss' lie. It would have cheapen story if only a little

Damnit, I expected Jaune to come out with it and tell Weiss that it was his fault for not being truthful. I don't want to see how Weiss will react to finding out Jaune is a fraud. Why couldn't he just admit it before it was revealed to Weiss

Over the past few chapters, I realize why I love Jaune and Weiss' training sessions.

It reminds me a YA book I read way back in middle school. The Eragon books. In the 4th book, Arya and Eragon spar a lot to help Eragon's growth. Their relationship was very similar to canon RWBY. A complete one-sided love that was never returned though at least they became amicable towards each other.

I always felt that despite both those two being close towards the end of the books, I was very saddened to know that it would stay unreciprocated love. It always lingered with me that not all feelings have to be reciprocated no matter how much you wish for it.

Just a bit of rambling, I love your story so much

It's an hour past midnight and I'm feeling all giddy reading this. What have you done to me?