Very interesting premise and a very novel approach to Luke's character, time travel and all. I literally read Luke's lines in Sir Humphrey's voice and pictured his superior smile on Luke's face. I'm looking forward to see if you eventually continue this.

Truly, a monument to eloquent and highly humorous storytelling expressed in a most agreeable manner. As it has been so judiciously expressed before, please continue if you would. Kind regards.

It's been more than two years, I think this one's more than due for an update. This is genuinely funny. Something historically difficult to pull off. The thing that amazes me the most is that despite being complicated I actually managed to follow what Luke was saying. Maybe it's just my many years of reading under my belt but it was remarkably easy to make sense of it. Regardless lets call it a humble brag and please continue this because it is fantastic.

Luke is hilarious in this story. I’d love to see where you would take this.

You are a great writer, do you happen to author actual books? If so, in the unlikely event that you see this review, please do lead me towards them. If you post anywhere else, please tell me of those as well.

I'm going to read your other story after this. /Kidō Revision/ was incredible, and while I don't have as much vested interest in Star Wars, /Yes, Lord Vader/ has been quite enjoyable. Especially through Luke's conversation and incredibly varied language.

Thanks again for writing this.

Hilarious.

I hope you will continue this, because it's amazing.

Wut?

Never seen something like this, I loved it! Hope to read more soon :)

I cannot wait for more.

Love this story so far. Tarkin is just mad because he accidentally gave Vader an asset. Hope you update soon! I’d love to see more!

Please, please, please continue this. I am so intrigued by the premise. Old/young Luke is so much fun.

You are a fantastic writer.

This is wonderful! Hope you continue :)

As someone who a) does legal work and b) loves yes minister this makes me lol so very hard... I await an update with bated breath!