indubitably one of my finer reads

indubitably one of my finer reads

actually, he wrote it after Volume 2 ended and before Volume 3 ended I think

I just realized Ryuugi wrote this whole story a little after volume 1 finished and before Volume 3 ended.

about 7 months have passed since the start of the story. This means that Beacon starts soon. I know jaune won't go, but I hope he can work as an agent there, like a super spy

chad adam

you know what would suck/be cool

if raven just opened a tiny portal behind your head or heart, then just stabbed the sword through said portal, effectively making her one of the ultimate people for assasination and killing missions

to the guest reviewer who's been trashing... jealous much bro...this is actually better ones compared to FF trash standards... it's enjoyable...

This story is bogged down by the constant introduction of bizarre and irrelevant additions (OC/supernatural things) that are absolutely out of place in the RWBY universe.
Out of place in the sense of putting ketchup on spaghetti.
The writing is nothing impressive either.

yea it's trying to be this big epic adeventure story, but I think it really fails there due to the scale of the grim leader and the MC it just ruins it. It just makes so much irrelevant.

this whole riders thing is ruining the story

boooooring. Just gonna drop it, this arc ruined the story turned it to trash, like seriously? The grim leaders are shit. such shitty characters it's crazy.

haaa so very boring

this whole arc is thrash. pure and simple. Sad really

this is just wierd. and not in a god way, more unnecessarily ridiculous.