It was an awesome story, thank you and it’s the just 1st book.

Yeah, that was pretty good.

jaune and adam are da best bros when they can be bros. this story hits that one perfect

i think itll be amusing when he eventually dies and gains a. new skill* Respawn*

technically couldn't Jaune rip off his arm or legs?,

heal himself...

then heal the legs to regenerate an additional body... to create a bio clone? lol like kimmimaro from Naruto lol

i know you aren't the author(thanks for bringing this story to ffn from space battles its freaking the best gamer Jaune story ive ever read)

but if you think about it Jaune could force himself to age within his pockets of seperate time. or it would just happen as a result of his training periods eventually at his rate of growth he will need to spend years grinding to make differences.

as a result Jaune could easily catch up to Raven in physical age.

This story resulting in Jaune x Raven would be awesome! we'll see what happens.

the part where he literally has time to just get a coffee in the middle of his high stake theft is just toooo much hahahaha

I hope he doesn't pick up any bad habits from his Grandma. She seems like the type who would sacrifice an entire village just because it "seemed like she couldn't win".

-_- ...That was only book one? Jeez, only this guy would write a million word book as the first book of a series

Hmm, theory, what if Autumn is Summer? Like how Jaune was a reincarnation of Keter, could work, maybe

Good stuff!

A remarkable story that set the cannons to F#CK CANON, and truly became a unique story!

Gamerwise, this is a slow burn, especially compared to the glut of jump again gamers

Trash story, why would anyone reupload such trash?

1m words? I suppose I should congratulate author for being persistent enough to write such garbage for that long.

shit bro

shit story