Reviews for Trinity of Tokiwadai
SilverZ-TenoriO chapter 29 . 9/16
I'll be very delighted if you continued A certain unique blonde or The return of the king instead of this. Those fics of yours has a lot if potential. This story is good, but not good as your other stories.
RyuuFuyuScarlet chapter 28 . 9/13
totally shipping...totally shipping now if ya dont mind ill be selling tickets for this ship 3
harlequin320 chapter 29 . 9/1
lol, nice chapter as always, keep up the good work
Nameless2210 chapter 29 . 8/31
Nitpicks:

1) ""Still? It's the last day of summer break already."" : ""Still? It's almost the last day of summer break already.""

2) "He blinked as she eagerly grabbed the them and pulled out a pen." : "He blinked as she eagerly grabbed them and pulled out a pen."

3) "With a resigned sigh, the perpetually unfortunate boy in the world fully committed to his fate." : "With a resigned sigh, the perpetually unfortunate boy fully committed to his fate."

4) "Kamijou grimaced as he Mikoto landed next to him." : "Kamijou grimaced as Mikoto landed next to him."

5) "The laser however also drained them of all of their inertia thus slowing her attack down, making it possible for him to more easily evade her it." : "The laser however also drained them of all of their inertia thus slowing her attack down, making it possible for him to more easily evade it."

6) "Mikoto tried to concentrate of the fight but it was next to impossible." : "Mikoto tried to concentrate on the fight but it was next to impossible."

7) "Kurko groaned in annoyance." : "Kuroko..."

8) "Kamijou was the very picture of the triumphant hero standing over the defeated form of the villain, whilst surrounding by the ruined landscape that had been the product of their epic, climactic final duel." : "...whilst surrounded by..."
OBSERVER01 chapter 29 . 8/31
Excluding kuroko getting clued in to magic nothing new happened but its still a good chapter. I liked all 3 story arcs equally.
Axel Fones chapter 29 . 8/31
The conversation at the end where the girls were just hanging out and shooting the breeze was really enjoyable.
goddragonking chapter 29 . 8/31
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)
DEYWOS chapter 29 . 8/31
Its fine~
But I do expect a Naru X Shutarua biking date~
The two of them together in tight suits on a single motorcycle~
harlequin320 chapter 28 . 8/27
very amusing chapter, love the rabbit faction, lol, keep up the good work
Windsbane chapter 28 . 8/25
Ah, awkward date scenes are usually amusing no matter the gender preference of the couple. Good job on this one with Misaki acting like a voyeur and Gunha showing up out of nowhere trying to lecture her.

As always thanks for updating. This story is always a fun read.
OBSERVER01 chapter 28 . 8/24
Naru x Shutaura OTP FTW! :) XD wonder how narus friends and aquaintances will react to her new love life? :)
Axel Fones chapter 28 . 8/24
Well that was pretty cute. Rabbit faction was amusing as well.
Shinoki chapter 28 . 8/24
Viva la yuri indeed. Haha, that was such a cute date.
goddragonking chapter 28 . 8/24
great chapter , love the way this story is going, keep up the excellent work! Keep the good writing and hope for more update soon can't wait to read more:)
Nameless2210 chapter 28 . 8/24
Nitpicks:

1) "One said as small electric sparks was dancing between one of the girls hands." : "...girls' hands."

2) "That gave them something of a acquaintance and the confidence to call out to her." : "That made them something of a acquaintance and gave her the confidence to call out to her."

3) " Instead of being bored about it and ignoring it, Namikaze-san was actually happy about it." : " Instead of being bored about it and ignoring it like she usually did, Namikaze-san was actually happy about it."

4) "Once the blonde received the letter, she was at first elated." : "When the blonde had received the letter, she was at first elated."

5) "She couldn't wait to see what the exhibitionist had chosen to wear today," : "...today."

6) "Naru thought as smiled eagerly at the idea of the date ahead." : "...thought as she smiled..."

7) ""...She isn't even squeamish around me, so, progress."" : ""...She isn't even squeamish around me anymore, so, progress.""

8) "Naru protested, before she grew stern and issued an deadly threat." : "...a deadly threat."

9) "We even created a new OC to be it's second-in-command." : "We even created a new OC to be its second-in-command."
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