|Reviews for Van and the Missing Papayas|
| master of cheese graters chapter 3 . 4/1/2008
Don't bother saying that your still editing. That will make readers even more impatient.
| Ethereal Light chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
| 9TailedFox chapter 1 . 8/1/2007
Greatings from the 9 tailed Fox. Oh man is this funny! I don't know if I should laugh or cry, or laugh so hard that I cry. I cant wait until your done fixing the next two chapters. The first chapter leaves promise of side splitting reading. Regretfuly I say that it is not the best I have read, but it is most sertanly the funnies. I did notice one spelling error when Moonbay tells Van to stop picking fights you spelled it "Stops." Anyway it was great and I'm looking farward to the next two.
| TheSweety'sdibison chapter 3 . 2/28/2003
Wahh! You said that you were going to write more tomorrow. Wah! When was that? Last month? Wah. I want to read more. Wah. I love this story so much and Thomas in in it. Pleaz write more soon! Wah. I can't wait anymore. Wah! Wah!
| Mike chapter 3 . 2/11/2003
wright more soon this has to be the funniest zoids story anyone has ever written keep up the
| RavenWolfFortuneWolf chapter 3 . 2/6/2003
Heh, this was REALLY funny! I din't think this would really be this entertaining! I luv it! Continue it, please!
.:: RavenWolf ::.
| Hoshi no kawaii chapter 3 . 2/4/2003
Jamie: Van acts like Bit.
Krystal: whats a papaya?
Jamie: a fruit of some sort?
Krystal: a veggie?
Krystal : *watches Van run his face into the glass* *scoffs* idiot
Jamie:reeeeeally sounds like Bit
Krystal: *watches Van get hit with nuts*
Jamie: reeeeeeeeeally reeeeeeeeally sounds like Bit
Krystal: *watches Van"fight" the sqirrl* dumbass
Jamie: Bit's clone?
i luv da story write more!
| ryu chapter 3 . 2/3/2003
that was funny! where did all the papayas go? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! oh well im not as hoplessly clueless as vann-boy is. ehehe
| Michiko chapter 3 . 2/3/2003
Van made a new Friend, well at least as far as Fiona thinks. Great chapter, awsome work!
Keep it up!
| my fave Thomas Schubaltz chapter 3 . 2/2/2003
HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAA! *falls out if chair again* Whoops! *gets up, again* I LOVE this story! It IS VERY FUNNY! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Impatient Van! HAHAHA! Squirrel! HAHAHA! 1 lunch and hundereds of papaya trees later! HAHAHAHA!
I love it! PAPAYAAAAAAAAA! OH, could you PLEAZ put more Thomas in it? PLEEEEEEEEEEAZ? Hm...
I feel like eating papaya...
| my fave Thomas Schubaltz chapter 2 . 2/2/2003
HAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *falls out of chair* Woah! *gets up* I LOVE THIS STORY! It is SO funny!
Irvine steals chocolate and Zeke won't even share that papaya with VAN! HAHAHAHAHAHA! DOG! HAHAHAHAHA! Guy. HAHAHA! In the ! Of Gustavs WAY. HAHAHAHAHA! Great story! HAHAHAHAHA! Ke-KEEP IT UP! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
| ryu chapter 2 . 2/2/2003
that was really funny. when moonbay and irvine were standing there talking at the end i could see them cooly standing there like nothing was up. you that hilarious thing anime people like them do... if you dont know, i do and that's what matters! if this was chaotic century, i could just see vann begging on his knees. in guardian force hes more mature. hed ask and if he didnt get it tackle zeke.(reeeeal mature...)
i hope they get to the colony soon or someone is gonna die of boredom and/or annoyance!
ya... see ya
| Reviewer 101 chapter 2 . 2/1/2003
Please continue it, it was funny
| Michiko chapter 2 . 2/1/2003
I like..I like. Awsome work! Keep it up!
| Michiko chapter 1 . 2/1/2003
Ok, now that was funny. Keep this story up. Awsome work!