Reviews for Black Luminary |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The storm came and went, but I'm still feeling quite tense. Thanks for the chapter. Also, I like the story blurb ("The war..."). Not sure if it was always like that, but I'm noticing it now, and appreciating it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As always a delight to see an update. Quality work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ll take the over on if this story ends in 5 years. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, oh, oh… me is thinking its a reread time. Best character Arcturus getting some more page time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eagerly awaiting the next chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg you're back! Another excellent chapter. I can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Fantastic chapter, you have given us a lot to discuss on discord |
![]() ![]() ![]() It had been so long I'd forgotten what even happened in this story. Glad to have you back, even if it was quite a slow chapter. Looking forward to the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome work |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn wow. that's one mean point to stop the story on. come on. that needs to be updated. |
![]() ![]() I'd love to see astoria/harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, this was retarded. Harry is burning his bridges with everyone for no real reason beyond that he's too fucking stupid to use his words, as if he were a mentally deficient toddler. Is it really too hard for him to say: "hey guys, everyone is going to be looking at me funny for a bit, maybe it's best if you stay away for a while;" or, for his companions who surely should each have a brain of their own, to realize that on their own? Complete nonsense. And what the hell is up with Harry constantly ending up bleeding from all his orifices and needing to be hospitalized? Once, whatever. Twice, okay, sure I guess. Three times, what the fuck? I'm sure this chapter won't be the end of it either. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry's... moments... and his attitude near women seems unnecessarily dramatic—to the point Id' call it melodrama. |
![]() ![]() ![]() harry has a serious rape victim vibe in this |
![]() ![]() ![]() These Hermione interludes are so painful and pointless. The stroy is moving at a snails pace and there has been very little plot progression. Getting hard for me to read further. |