Looking forward to the next chapters

I love this it is great

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where is the next chapter man

Not bad naruto seems a bit of in character and priorities but all and all a good chapter i think a time skip of a couple years is needed after this chapter which idk yet if you did or no so here hoping

Like the brother sister shit

Really like the first chapter very compelling and enjoyed every minute of the read also thumbs up for the ecchi kami that lives inside him reminds me of karami the fem version of karama from another fanfic although they got sexual the first chapter lol

You've made some odd decisions but overall the writing quality is quite high except for -as you said yourself- the lack of actual character communication.

It'd be interesting to see Yui reintroduced 3 to 4 years down the line via an Akatsuki attack on a random village later with 3 of the Konoha 12 there for a mission... :P

Sorry for spam but I'm curious as to why this next chapter isn't out yet? I'm not trying to rush you or anything but I truly am curious. Is it school? That slows down my writing as well. Just hope you clarify your reasoning in the next chapter (In which you most likely will)

Why did you have Naruto and Yui kiss? That scene felt a bit incestuous. Aside from that I really enjoy your story. Keep up the good work.

I really like what you did there. Minus Yui leaving. That totally came out of nowhere. Didn't expect it at all. Of course every girl will be having an orgasm after seeing Naruto but I already expected that since I read with the knowledge of this being a harem fic. Great chapter. Can't wait to read the next one. I hope you update soon.

love it more more

Pretty fun read. A little over-detailed. It is unfortunate Naruto never revealed Danzo's role in Ame, with Orochimaru, the massacre, and ROOT. Almost every major tragedy in the series was directly or indirectly caused by or contributed to by Danzo. In fact there is almost no chance Danzo did not know about Yui and would never let her leave the village. I mean in canon he caused a lot of crap just so he could get his regen, wood release, mind control, and respawn abilities. What would he do for a chakra reality hack? Especially when the current holder of the ability is civilian.

that was good keep the chapters coming

Good chapter, good story so far. However, even without romance between Naruto and Hinata, how could he dinner with Ino, Sakura and Sasuke but don't give his future wife a Good morning. The only interaction was save from bullies and sit besides. You are already portraying Naruto as a big asshole than Sasuke and that is something. And your excuse 'she won't faal for him first sight' is worse than Kakashi ones and you are bullshitting instead of admitting that you don't know how or don't write the NaruHina romance. And that's my rant.