Reviews for Divine Reset - The Epic Path
Gbds chapter 5 . 12/9/2016
Good chapter, good story so far. However, even without romance between Naruto and Hinata, how could he dinner with Ino, Sakura and Sasuke but don't give his future wife a Good morning. The only interaction was save from bullies and sit besides. You are already portraying Naruto as a big asshole than Sasuke and that is something. And your excuse 'she won't faal for him first sight' is worse than Kakashi ones and you are bullshitting instead of admitting that you don't know how or don't write the NaruHina romance. And that's my rant.
Gbds chapter 2 . 12/9/2016
Longest. Seal. Description. EVER!
RaidenUzumaki14 chapter 5 . 12/7/2016
this is awesome. i love the style. i just hope naruto does not resort to kurama in every fight. i love reading him winning with hiraishin and sage mode ans just regular jutsu like rasengan.
Dr1zzy chapter 1 . 11/21/2016
Bravo ! Author awesome story so far plz update
Sunstar Writer chapter 5 . 11/18/2016
Thus story is amazing! I laughed so hard I thought I was gonna pee with that last bit with Mizuki! Please update again soon, this is too brilliant to not be updated XD
avid11read11er chapter 5 . 11/13/2016
Great start. I'm looking forward to where you take this.
zugna chapter 5 . 11/13/2016
Please i beg for an update so bad
nice chapter chapter 2 . 11/9/2016
I enjoyed this, the chunin threatening a 10 year old civilian in front of witnesses seemed a little odd but to be honest i've seen people in RL do dumber stuff for less reason, i also liked the way you played off the odd reactions of people to naruto and covered future ones.

the way you described the house and gave it a value to show the wierd actions on the fathers part and why the chunin would be reacting to such a loss was a nice touch.

a couple of things that broke SOD though, firstly the hokage wouldn't react that way to the chunin, especially in public. what he's been seen doing doesn't justify that response, ie being sacked and sent to be randomly tortured at somebodies whim. a more measured response would be to demote him and send him to ibiki to make sure it is an isolated incident.
the other thing that bugged me was meat. a hare provides a little under a kg of usable meat, a boar 25-40 kg. if he was to go through it in 2-3 days he'd be eating 4kg of meat at each meal, nevermind veg and carbs.
AzureSoulReaper chapter 5 . 11/9/2016
i look foreword to more soon
roylato chapter 5 . 11/7/2016
plz...update soon...
HaywireEagle chapter 5 . 11/6/2016
Honestly. the fingerless gloves thing is just.. ill fitting? It's like Naruto not liking orange or Ramen.
HaywireEagle chapter 1 . 11/6/2016
While Strong MC's are nice. I love it better when they are not silly one-dimensional characters with little to no real personality.

You seem to not be having that issue. I love how clueless Naruto is when it comes to women. It is a bit adorable and amusing at the same time.
arinasution5 chapter 5 . 11/5/2016
Go
InfinityMask chapter 5 . 11/4/2016
Hmmm.. I really like what you make in academy.. I think it's really funny.. Lol.. Oh mizuki incident also good!
InfinityMask chapter 4 . 11/4/2016
I'm curious... Will Naruto prevents Uchiha massacre?
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