Y'know, it's tough to do a time-travel fic, especially one involving a god(dess), but I think you're doing a good job of it. It's also well-written, with no observed spelling or grammatical errors, which is always a plus in my book. I've enjoyed it so far, though in my opinion I think Naruto should've been allowed to keep his feelings for Hinata and their children, as it would have kept an additional plot point open for utilization, especially if Hinata doesn't admire him from afar this time like she did before. However, that's just my opinion, so take it with a grain of salt. :D

Isn't Yui... you know... TEN? You don't need to make the bandits paedophiles for us to see them as bad guys, you know.

I really enjoyed your first three chapters and I think a name that might work is "the unexpected effects of divine boredom״ or something along those lines. I know it's not an amazing name but it's what I thought of a couple minutes ago. Good luck with the story and deciding on a new name.

Awesome job please update this more often

I'm finding this story very interesting. Good job!

great chapter keep it up

I don't think I like where the fanfiction is heading. Narutoverse has so many various different characters but you decided to focus on OCs. Well, others might get a kick out of it but not me. I also think you should remove the semi-godlike tag on the story summary. Your Naruto will be stuck as a little kid for awhile, right? Nothing godlike about Naruto as a kid, not even semi-godlike. Maybe a prodigy? But not godlike for sure.

Good story i hope you finish it as it is a good story

sweet

Great chapter. Can't wait for more.

Nice going with naruto's power level not sky rocketing to hokage but still what you would expect from some one who has experience but not the power to use it. Looking forward for the next chapter.

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story

Update when you can please.

Could you get rid of the God in his head? The side commentary is really annoying.

"Naruto and Kami's Time Travel Vacation"? I dunno. First thing that came to mind.

So this is pretty good. You apparently didn't like the intro in the first chapter but I thought it was decent. Didn't waste time explaining a premise we've seen hundreds of times. Set the tone by cutting out the angsty garbage you usually see. It was fine.

Word of advice, though. Timeskips. Unless you want to write the story of five year old Naruto for the next 100,000 words. I'd recommend at most two more chapters of this before moving forward. We've established most of the changes, let's start moving on.