1. I'm gana be honest with you when it comes to the sister thing I'm a little neutral I don't hate her but I don't love her either well see how it plays out.
2. The name is fine but if you really want to change it then how about Naruto take 2 (let's see I'f we can get a bit more action this time hu.) I say it that way because of her reason for doing it in the first place but that's only if you like it.
3. And your doing ok so far keep it up the plot up to now is pretty good so I can't wait for your next update hope it's soon.

I like how detailed you are that shows skill to ya know and I like that you didn't make him God like to quickly but are building him up to it fast but realistic.

Naruto's reactions to suddenly finding himself in the past at the beginning of the chapter ar what killed it for me. In no way shape or form does his response reflect that of a 40ish highly trained killer/assassin/ninja Jesus. The way you wrote his initial response to the situation was just completely unrealistic and more akin to how his child self would react than how the mature and experienced adult Naruto would.

great chapter keep it up

I hope you don't go overboard with the Japanese words. The amount that you put in so far is fine but i feel like using ohaiyo instead of just good morning is unnecessary. I wonder if you're gonna use the English or Japanese version of ninjutsu names.

I hope the truth comes to light she shouldn't hate her father if he tried to save her

Oh snap, awesome cliffhanger, I wonder who will be able to tell that something has changed Naruto, my bet is on one of the parents of the ino-shika-cho, keep up the amazing writing

Awesome story, I can't wait to see what happens from here, I have some hopes that Naruto grows out of his dense view of other people soon, and because of his actual age he can understand social cues and scenarios better.

buenas tardes primero que todo tengo que decirle que tu historia es entretenida pero algo no cuadra aqui y es que naruto aprendio hacer sellos de los textos de su padre y su ¿madre que? ella es un uzumaki y ellos eran conocidos por fuinjutsu y kenjutsu pero no lo mencionas ¿por que? acaso el esta interesado mas en su padre que su madre ¿no te parece raro?. otra cosa ¿manami es un oc?.

awesome job

I would like it if you made naruto and his new sisters relationship similar in Fella Pure: Mitarashi-san Chi no Jijou.

Well better than last chapter, btw the harem tag helps, it helped me find this fic so...
Anyway, I don't mind the Oc or the possible Ocs you introduce, since this is a new "path" Naruto is taking so it's naturally obvious things won't go as Canon and Yui seems really cute and ... Naughty.
The length is also a good point, it's not short nor super long. And it's enjoyable this way.
I'm still afraid about the the story timeline tho, so much things to write and it takes hate that a story im starting to like gets abandoned or on hiatus but that's for the future. It was a good chapter and thanks for advice of the description, lots of people like to read them but I'm not along those even due I appreciate you took your time writing :)
So if you continue updating twice a month with the same length and developing properly the relationship of the characters with each other and story like you have been doing so far. Then I think this fic has potential to become a really awesome story with action and romance , perfect combination.
And about the harem, I would not suggest names , the more the best haha
Haven't seen any grammar or spelling errors so far.
Don't lose the inspiration.
#TeamHarem

go on

Ino - age six - saying the bullies pissed themselves to her parents?

Other than that really good.

keep up the good work work at your own pace but make sure you post