Reviews for Sunkit's Destiny |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Is...Is it dead? |
![]() ![]() ![]() "snek" |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dr. |
![]() ![]() ![]() All I understood was something about God and a mattress |
![]() ![]() ![]() mmmm |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS IS A FREAKING MASTERPIECE. How can anyone call this a trollfic?! This is the peak of perfection. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m sorry, but this grammar is worse than Starkit’s Prophecy’s is. Also, WHAT THE HECK? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Goodness this is hard to understand. Er... how is the title spelled correctly anyway? This is a trollfic, you must be seeing a lot of red while writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah... I now realize that this is truly a trollfic. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would advise using some sort of spell check for this story. I would also recommend keeping careful track of events and the order in which they happen. I would also like to see some updates! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This HAS TO be a trollfic. How can you spell the title correctly, but misspell everything else? Oh wait, you can't! The plot of your stories are decent, but you don't put any effort into grammar or spelling or any of the basics of writing. I'm honestly not that good of a writer plot-wise, but I can't help, but cringe whenever I see stuff like this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um...didn't Sparklydust already die? |
![]() ![]() ![]() FLam!111111!1!11!111!11111 ew ths is badssda git guud b4 u pso tish!1111!11111 |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL XD Maybe some of you possibly should have noticed this is a prolific? The title is spelled perfectly. ._. |
![]() ![]() Sorry about my earlier review. I did not get it finished because my device died. Most of the people who are giving you advice are not trying to flame you or be mean. If you want people to like your story better you should try using autocorrect and longer chapters would hook readers better. Also, people do not like reading about Mary-Sues, so the plot line should be tweaked a little bit. If the reason that your spelling looks like it might need autocorrect is that you have a disability, then you should tell everyone because then they will have more sympathy for you and your story. I am NOT trying to flame you! -Hollystar of Thunderclan |