Reviews for Always
halfreks chapter 1 . 9/5/2017
I love this! I'm a big fan of this pairing and even though nothing explicitly romantic happens here, I think you capture them and the dynamic I imagine them to have well, maybe I'm reading into it but I think there's an allusion to something more than platonic here?

But mostly I love the way you write and how you write, I love the setting of the lake and how you describe it. My favourite part is this, close to the end:

"Cho tips up so she's treading water and Marietta copies her. Marietta's skin has gone freckled in the sun and her red hair is plastered to her head, only a few wayward curls still dry and frizzing at her temples."

Just because I think it's beautiful, I really enjoy the way you use imagery here, and your description of Marietta is spot on in my mind.