Reviews for Pitch
momadrigal chapter 1 . 9/19/2016
Thiss was really nice, the start was a little off, but it was real nice.
jamieslady chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
GE survivors brought me here and i love it... really enjoyed the whole story. Beautifully crafted and thoroughly believable
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
This is just beautiful. Thank you
Moon Stone Tiger Lily chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
that was really good
Hanable-13 chapter 1 . 9/13/2016
great start to a story.. but it does make a complete story.. kind of. *pout* so i guess u dont HAVE to finish the story.

H }:)
Vera Hart chapter 1 . 9/11/2016
This is unbelievably cute. I've never been into short stories really, but I love this one. Keeeeeeep writing!
Love always, Vera
Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2016
So, so cute. 3
Mistress DragonFlame chapter 1 . 9/11/2016
This was sweet.
LadiePhoenix007 chapter 1 . 9/9/2016
Brilliant one-shot! Love it!
Meiri chapter 1 . 9/4/2016
Present tense isn't normally my thing-it feels like I am intruding on the character. That said, I am glad I read your one-shot. Your use of present tense allows a view into Draco’s vulnerability that we may not have gotten if it were written another way.

I like how gradually Draco allows things to build up between them, even though he probably could have pushed things further after she healed him.

I also like that they both have foot-in-mouth moments that stall progress a bit. The awkwardness isn't all one-sided, and it isn't all just Draco pushing Hermione away.
BeauteousCupcake chapter 1 . 9/4/2016
Absolutely loved the two of them, perfection.
Jenna98 chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
Another amazing fic! I loved that draco was not an over-confident jerk and that hermione gave him a chance!
AnnaOxford chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
Their reach majority at 17 and there is only one Head Girl. Cute fic though.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
It seems weird to say that was super adorable since it was HOT but it was super adorable! It could totally be canon as well, I just adore the way you wrote Draco in this fic (although I'm always a sucker for Draco Malfoy :))
I loved this story! Kisses xxx
Mary in Hogwarts chapter 1 . 9/2/2016
Hello :) That was really sweet and romantic. I love the thought of Draco alone under the shower. This scene shows his longing and difficult love quite well. Draco is not OOC being smug and all of that. Nice work. Also thank you for the happy ending. About the dance :) ... I think his father will hear about that :)
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