Reviews for Night-Blooming Cereus (昙花一现)
BOOP chapter 88 . 1/11
Это хорошо
FuckYeahShikaku chapter 1 . 1/11
hey author just wanted to stop by and tell you how much i appreciate you thanks for sharing your art with us (for free !?) and commiting to finishing this story! im not sure if you know but this story gets recommended on r/narutofanfiction all the time (or used to be? im not on reddit much anymore) and im so glad i found it bc it will forever live in my library! btw not sure if you realized but over 900k words is isanely impressive, like wow!
Dananator chapter 38 . 11/15/2024
Why do you always nerf the mc so much when in important situations. She should be equal or greater in stats to Kakashi by now, yet she still flubs in regular battles? Really?
AsclepiusCato chapter 23 . 10/26/2024
0/10. Character has more plot armor than Naruto. The author attempts to put them in scenario's than make the MC seem not 'Mary Sue' but does it too often. The MC should be called the God of Luck at this point.
blazingwolffang chapter 6 . 9/22/2024
3 genin puppeteers can not control a dozen puppets even kankuro a puppet prodigy could only control 3 by shippuden also there is no way suna who has the shittiest biju seal also has space time seals
Zsombi chapter 15 . 9/1/2024
I don't inderstand many authors' and by extension their Characters' facination and obsession with Anbu. It is as if that would be the end all be all group/rank to make one more powerful and the only road to success.

As Konan and several Akatsuki members perfectly exemplify, among some other canon characters, being part of (and bound by) any organized group is not actually necessary to fast becoming OP. Honestly, despite the abundance of learning materials provided by even just joining the Ninja Academy, becoming part of the system is a waste of time (and forfeiture of freedom of choice), that could be better spent training, learning or doing other stuff.

Gai is another proof, that endless repetitions of a few things is more than enough to become great, and he achieved that pretty much on his own effort on his own time. While higher level training partners is all well and good.. the time spent on useless missions would be better spent on training and caring for the brother. The MC could have easily spent the month long physical training in Anbu on her own doing exactly the same thing and would have reached the exact same end results, without having to dump the brother she should be caring for on someone else, further exacerbating his bad state of mind.

A good ninja always strives to achieve their goals with the least amount of effort, the shortest amount of time and resources expended. The only way to perform as such is through doing fully into Sealing. With the sharingan's instant memorization passive ability it would be a cakewalk to become nearly master just by memorizing existing patterns, the rules and using them. Mastery would of course require understanding too.. but anyone can do math, physics and code without understanding, by just knowing the facts and tools and how to apply them by the rules. In this world Chakra is everything. So all it would take is a wide area nullifier or total suppressor effect, and even the most top tier ninja would drip dead in an instant, or at the very least be reduced to a crumpled meatsack. That is why the Uzumaki were really feared, the potential of Sealing and their ability with it.
Zsombi chapter 14 . 9/1/2024
She argues, that she can care for her brother, then promptly joins an organization which is by definition detached from the world.. instantly contradicting herself and just proving theat she is in fact incapable of caring for him.
Zsombi chapter 4 . 8/30/2024
The only sure way they could ever truly secure the compound is if they would have gone full steam into sealing. Other than the Uzumakis' innate talent for it, the Utchihas' photographic sharingan memorization are the most suited for usong it. Sealing is kinda like programming, math and physics.. all of which are entirely based on facts, fact based variables and a bunch of factual rules and logic connections (logic rules). One can be a master even if they don't understand anything but still remember everything whenever required.

Doing anything else will be a waste of time. But of course, the drama would be short lived, ending the story in a few chapters, so I'm guessing they did not take the logical route.
Guest chapter 29 . 3/31/2024
Ultimate combo, Time Freeze Amaterasu.

See me Personally I'd Attempt to Use Another Summoning Jutsu to Get out of there Jiraya Style. And hope that the Animal species i get summoned to meet us more helpful than those Annoying Mutts
negortin chapter 2 . 2/21/2024
I read these first 2 chapters and really liked what you wrote so far. but you're completely correct in that there is a huge difference between how you write now and how you wrote all those years ago. I sadly could not get through the next chapter after that. but as you said everyone starts somewhere and you have really improved it seems. so I just wanted to congratulate you on that. I don't think I will be able to read until the writing catches up to where you are now. but anyway, keep up the good work.
jixuel chapter 45 . 2/10/2024
Honestly, this town is rotten. I'd love her to destroy this dump called Konoha. If not that, at least get sasuke and get out. There's nothing good there for the Uchiha
jixuel chapter 36 . 2/10/2024
Shisui, Kakashi, you sons of bitches. You know with 100% certainty that Danzo would go after the remaining Uchihas in Konoha, and yet you don't open your mouths to say anything other than a superficial and useless warning?
Honestly, my suspension of disbelief is wavering with this forced situation here.

In the afterlife, Shisui didn't want to tell us about the Uchiha Cla Coup, but I can understand that with great difficulty. BUT WHY THE FUCK DIDN'T HE WARN HER THAT DANZO COMMANDS THE ROOT AND HAS A CRAVING FOR SHARINGANS? It doesn't make any sense, shisui is fucking dead, he could have told mc about danzou, the coup too by the way...

This is just forced drama, stupidly fragile to believe
jixuel chapter 29 . 2/10/2024
At this rate, she'll soon lose her sight completely... How can itachi be so much more efficient than her and Sasuke?
Guest chapter 4 . 12/11/2023
Such a pathetic and Weak OC
Child of Dreams chapter 21 . 10/30/2023
Gaara?
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