Reviews for Beyond The Veil
Episoidal chapter 1 . 8/22
I have some criticisms of the story you've written so far:

1. The dialogue is hyper unrealistic. I cringed at how inept all the characters who talked in this chapter were.

2. Why is Harry randomly showing off his powers for absolutely no reason?

3. Why does Harry have a hero complex...? He sounds even more naïve than he did when he first joined Hogwarts as a First-year.
DragonReader18 chapter 21 . 6/25
I do not know where you went but if you are still alive could you finish this amazingly AWESOME story! Pretty please?
Lucifer-Sterling chapter 8 . 6/5
Death: I'm tired of you're bullshit, master
harry: huh uh so let me continue
RyTheGuy chapter 10 . 5/25
This story is annoying with how Harry rubber bands with his competence. Sometimes he is an ultra powerful god who can solve anything, sometimes he is a useless idiot who forgets he has magic. Really irritating
overlord of hell 2012 chapter 1 . 5/25
Loved your story andwould love to read more and find out hoq it ends
Rkumar chapter 21 . 5/9
One of the most detailed plots so far.. please find it in you to complete it .. pretty please.
AvidGamer chapter 4 . 5/2
It should be perfectly acceptable to earn the same medal multiple times. While I don't remember his name, there's a SEAL who was awarded the Medal of Honor twice for example.
Looki124 chapter 7 . 4/28
Who is this mark ? and why do you want to fire all your gun on it if it yours ?
DebaterMax chapter 21 . 4/26
love it
RyuuyaOoguro chapter 3 . 4/24
reach and flexibility huh?
PotatoGremlin chapter 21 . 4/19
I loved this story and it’s definitely one of the best crossovers I’ve ever read. I was wondering if it’s still ongoing? Keep up the great work.
Guest chapter 15 . 2/16
Disgusting just disgusting
Ashran31 chapter 21 . 1/31
Next chapter please!
Guest chapter 4 . 1/29
Useless MC USELESS fanfic
Guest chapter 3 . 1/29
Trash. You Made MC op but retard. Fucking IDIOT
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