Reviews for Beyond The Veil
starboy454 chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
excellent start
Alex2909 chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
always liked stories where harry goes other universes
Numbers261 chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
I just finished reading Harry Potter: Geth and searched for more crossovers and yours popped up! I do so hope that you will continue to update this great start to an epic story!
J-Titor chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
Great story, my only critique is the long paragraphs could be broken up a bit more
PenAndKey chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
Very nice start to a story I'd love to see you continue. Since Harry is so insanely overpowered remember to give him some aspects to keep him grounded. Use anything, really. Humor can work, or friends and allies that can be put in danger, or even the always popular "personal moral growth" plot type. And, if you're still undecided, I'm definitely in favor of the same universe now-present time storyline. The rest have potential, but I'd love to see a magic fueled humanity story with this much of an edge against the Reapers.
infinitearchivealpha chapter 1 . 9/2/2016
please continue the story is pritty good and i would like to see more
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