|Reviews for With Broken Wings|
| Panthermonspartner chapter 24 . 10/12/2012
Wonderful story, though I think the ending felt a bit rushed. Still fantastic job.
| zigmas chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
| Boshoku chapter 3 . 1/21/2009
No matter how often I come back to read this, it leaves me in a state of shock and awe each time. I still remember the first time I read this; I was constantly on the edge of my seat. I love how you portrayed all the characters in this story, and it's rare that I enjoy reading about the OCs as much as I do the canonical characters. It's all disturbingly realistic in terms of how they've aged and their personalities. Truly one of my favorites, and I'll definitely be reading this again in time.
In fact, I think I'll start rereading now.
| Reiko x 3 chapter 24 . 11/4/2007
Dark: *waves hand in front of eyes* Hello-o? Little light?
Dark: *scowls* Snap out of it.
Dark: *snaps* GET OVER IT, ALREADY!
...But this fic...was just so...COOL! I LOVE IT!
Dark: So do I, but do you see me going semi-catatonic over it?
Not enough torture involved to trigger your happy-sadist mode, then?
Dark: *sulks* Just a few more chapters worth of the kid being near death or medically dead and I would have been satisfied...
Dark: Why doesn't that bother you any more ? You used to grumble about it at least once a day...
I've grown used to it. I'm afraid I know you far to well, my dear dark side.
Dark: ...Never thought I'd see the day you'd actually ACCEPT my more destructive...hobbies. *smirks* I'm proud of you.
...Whatever. *ahem* We loved your fic.
Dark: Partially because it had Ken-sama.
*blushes*...Yeah that. Still have a crush on him after all these years... I'm definately going to be checking out the later installments of the Digimon series. They seem to have some...interesting...characters. Um, I guess that's all I have to say. Ja ne!
Dark: Ja matta ne!
| BridgitKiido chapter 24 . 12/23/2006
I wonder why I didn't find and read this sooner. This was an excellent story. Of course, the whole Ki being Ken thing was (somewhat painfully) obvious to me ever since he first showed up... But it was really good - I'm planning on reading the sequel as soon as I have the time. -
| Gaarafan14 chapter 24 . 8/21/2006
I don't like this! Kouichi 's acting like a total demon and i hate that. This story sucks!
| lightningbugg74 chapter 15 . 1/2/2006
hey... wow this story is amazing
o yea... and if this is the same "early edition" i think you're talking about, with the guy who gets a newspaper a day early, look up .tv and look for early edition there, cuz its on tv now
but if u have no idea about what im talking about, im sorry for wasting ur time...
but ur story is awesome and i really cant wait for the crossover story between you and Ken's Luver
| jenny KA chapter 3 . 10/30/2004
-_- oh this chapter was very very depresing I was crying so hard that it was almost impossible to read. my eyes are still watery. I can't help it. I hear real depresing thing to much. Its weird I like the writing and the story even though kouichi is evil. Why is he evil(*sigh)As you might have guessed if you have read some of my other reviews. He is my faverate charictor. well so far the story is intresting I hope it stays that way
from your frend
Ps excuse any spelling errors. Thanks
| CrAzY-SiLLy-Me chapter 24 . 10/2/2004
Hmm... a really good story where the characters are in-character. (For me) There are some parts where ther's wrong spelling but I guess we can't always avoid that. I just had trouble with chapter 22 because something's wrong with my PC. The part where Kouichi/ the Kaiser removed Beowolfmon's helmet violently and where many gasped, after that, there were no more parts of the chapters which really annoys me since I'm having such a great time reading this fic. The way you detailed it is good. How you made Kouji tell Izumi his life when he was still a slave was good too. So far, everything seems to be in order. It would be nice if you had a sequel to this. Why? I just think it sounds great. With or without any pairings. The story itself is interesting. Keep it up. I'm really hoping you would have a sequel to this. But only if you have enough time. Good luck!
| dejimonfrontier chapter 24 . 9/18/2004
good, ending. I like your describtion and how things fall in place. the ending was a little confusing though, Ive read Echoes of Angle who wont return and not everything matches. I thought that Izumi and Kouji were haveing a little time out with eachother. and has Kouji finally forgave Kouichi? o well, it was awesome all together anyways.
| Lance Murdock chapter 24 . 7/19/2004
Finally finished it. As expected it was great. I had a feeling Ki was Ken, and when one thinks about it as ya read the chapters, it was foreseeable. The battles in the final chapters were great. Daisuke vs. Lilymon, Omegamon vs. Dukemon Crimson Mode and of course, Kouji vs. Kouchi, were all good fights. I love the part were Himi gets Guilmon and Agumon as partners. It was swell. I think it's a shame the Tamers didn't appear. I'd love to see Beelzebumon appear, but oh well, not that big a deal. I can tell a few things were left out because of the sequel in the works. I look forward to it. The fic was great, I saw no problems in it.
| Coral chapter 11 . 7/13/2004
the guy is Ken Ichijouji isn't it. I know it is. Must go and read now.
| Lance Murdock chapter 12 . 7/4/2004
Finally decided to read this. Hm, this Ki does have me thinking. Who could he be? I could just skip ahead, but there's no fun in that. I'll have to do it the old fashion way. The story is good so far. You don't focus on romance, and it's not an overly emotional affair that envolves far to much crying in a pitiful effort to build character. You develop the characters perfectly and realisticly, you don't bash, well, anyone(thank god!), you've made great uses of often ignored characters, such as the Himuras-Minamotos and Tomoki's brother, and your OCs are very intresting. They don't excel in everything and don't beat the crap out of everything they touch. They actually have problems and are not perfect. But best of all it has torture! Um, I mean the Kaiser. You've done the Kaiser perfectly. So far this fic is pretty good, and I look forward to finishing it.
| Darkbahamut chapter 24 . 3/13/2004
great story! I never actually noticed how much Kouichi and Kouji look like Ken! and thnx to you mentioning that the story and chapter titles are song names, I've found alot of good songs! hope ya come up with another good story like this soon!
| Palmon chapter 24 . 1/4/2004
Superb story! Um, just one thing...so..Kouichi didn't confess to Kouji..right? Anyway, please don't be offended because I love your stories no matter what!