Reviews for Consort of the Sun |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent update. I’m interested in some of the political crap. And I hate politics so well done getting me interested. Cami is cruel for her making Hiccup eat something spicy ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Arrival to grandeur, pageantry, wonder...politics, what seems to be an undercurrent of so many things that include Hiccup in the Yorvani's culture, plans, a few pranks to withstand before wiping out for the day... CB73 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, at least he's got a nice house... but I have a feeling he won't have such happy times, especially when he meets the council... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm a big fan of this story, and I'm glad to see another update! Good work, mate. It should be interesting to see how things in the city play out. |
![]() ![]() More please good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this idea for this story! At this point Hiccup is seriously overstepping his bounds and thinking too highly of himself. I genuinely look forward to the next chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm kinda hoping that there is something special about him or that he is the only male she has ever been attracted to. It just seems kinda of boring if he isn't attractive, special or something but she is the all powerful war chief. It feels like something is lacking |
![]() ![]() ![]() Astrid's voice is the best here. I'm enjoying myself reading this! |
![]() ![]() Sorry, but it is nearly impossible to like Hiccup is this story (He is not trusting his own instincts concerning Jatha. And justifying this with the trite "the enemy of his enemy was my friend" is emotional and political folly and naiveté at its worst.) . . . As for Astrid, she is now applying pressure to "speed things up" which is coercion which, should Hiccup comply, is still rape. Which might become prostitution if Hiccup agrees to do have coitus so that he can correspond with his Dad which brings me back to my first point, it really is hard to like Hiccup in this story . . . All that being said, this is a brilliantly written story and I, for one, hope you continue soon. |
![]() ![]() Wow, nice long chapter - thank you very much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter, keep it up XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not sure why this is posted here? Other than names, theres nothing HTTYD. Berk, quick and gone, not an island, a large kingdom, Berk in name only. No Norse gods, a new made up god. Hiccup and Astrid are new characters. Nothing like the HTTYD characters we know. No tribes from the movie, series. And, so far not even a mention of dragons. This HTTYD in name only. |
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![]() ![]() I REALLY like this story! I can't wait to see where you take this. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your hard work. This is one of the best stories going right now. Thanks again! |
![]() ![]() I wonder if the situation with Jatha will become a bigger problem in the future. |