Reviews for Harry Potter and the Juggernaut's Resolve
SithLordNilis chapter 10 . 6/13
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god of all chapter 10 . 3/24/2017
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
Calmzone1 chapter 10 . 3/24/2017
Interesting story. Thanks for the laughs. I would probably only have put Ginny at the front as the head rabid fan girl ;)
atymer chapter 10 . 3/16/2017
I was enjoying the humor in this. You under rate your skills. I hope you change your mind and keep it going.
god of all chapter 7 . 9/13/2016
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
DemonKaiser chapter 4 . 9/13/2016
Story content is good but could improve by not overly describing things. Another thing I find that kills the mood is when each paragraph or so is a huge chunk of words. To improve, don't include the dialogue within each section. instead whenever someone talks or thinks, try to let it be separate instead of it all jumbled up. I didn't want to read past chapter 2 because of each section. Try to stylize your writing with the way authors use page breaks and line spacing.
god of all chapter 3 . 9/11/2016
Great chapter and story so far pleases continue this story soon.
EchoWaves chapter 4 . 9/10/2016
I like the more assertive Harry, J had given him more internal strength and belief in himself. can't wait for chapter 5!
EchoWaves chapter 2 . 9/9/2016
Loving it so far, can't wait to see what else happens when Harry and J get rolling!
god of all chapter 2 . 9/9/2016
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.