Reviews for The Red Knight
pregar chapter 47 . 7/19
The 1st year was good. The tournament was great. But the last few chapters? Damn amazing.
elorielee chapter 47 . 7/16
Damn, I was just thinking last week that there simply weren't any fanfictions, never mind any good ones, about Ron.

Thanks for changing that. If you know of any others, I'd appreciate the name/link.
xxxLeanniexxx chapter 47 . 7/16
Wow- well that is certainly a confusing but interesting angle for everything.
Guest chapter 18 . 7/14
I could swear I've read this from Harry's perspective.
Is this a common setup in Ron-bashing fanfiction? or is this based on another fanfic?
It could also be the scar?maybe?
TroyWeb chapter 1 . 7/12
This makes for a good audio book. The dialogue is very well written and easy to listen to when I am on break. Especially all the back and forth between Ron and Daphne. The Witches of Slytherin Society running gag makes me laugh every time. Ron saying lines like "May she live forever" with a straight face is hilarious. I like the way you have this pop up in multiple chapters. Also keep referring to Tracy as the Unloved Second. That part cracks me up!

Rereading this fan fic, I find that I am skipping over the Hermione chapters and focusing on the Luna chapters and Daphne chapters. You need to give Luna and Pandora some more chapters in the future. Maybe have Ron intervene in the bullying Luna is getting in Ravenclaw. I can imagine how differently this Ron will act when he finds out that Ravenclaws have been hiding Luna's belongings. Also Pandora is more of a mother figure to Ron than Molly. Ron could turn to her for advice. All of his prior experience doesn't mean that Ron has all of the answers.

Keep up the good work!
MarilynT chapter 47 . 7/8
Interesting take on the time travel story. I do miss Sirius though as he is one of my favorite characters. Different Bella definitely interesting. Thank you for writing.
conan.lagace chapter 47 . 7/5
This is the first story I've read on the app that I didn't get annoyed with. So props there been reading this stuff way too long. It's honestly refreshing, your story that is. It's something I haven't read before and really well written. What you've done with ron is simply beautiful. How you set up the casting and dodging and setting up plots within plots was masterful. I hope to read more
fml chapter 47 . 7/4
Or the older Ron is "Evil Ron" and is trying to trap and assimilate his counterpart so that he can score with all those babes.
Geraint a8b chapter 47 . 7/2
I would really like to read more. The story drew me in, and I practically finished it in 2 days. Thanks
Alice Nick Odair chapter 16 . 6/26
[continuation] I have a hunch that she knows whats going on with rons near death incidents and is covering for hermione. I also dont get why she would expect the guy who hermione has been nothing but a total bitch too, to help find and rescue said nasty person. I get that all three of them are reincarnated here and so they all have preconceived history with one another. But by doing that, violet just sound self-entitled to me and expected ron to be a complete doormat and go along with whatever she says. Not just in that situation although that one is the most obvious to me, but in all of their (ron and violets) interactions, she always have to get the upperhand or her way with ron. They have been getting on my nerve ever since they were introduced on this amazing story that while I like this fic a lot, I have to stop reading this as my outlook on it is getting increasingly negative.
Alice Nick Odair chapter 15 . 6/26
Im sorry but while I really like your version of Ron growing up with his future memories (shocking as I usually dont like Ron or fanfics about him), I gonna stop reading right here. Im only informing you of this because I think you have a great beginning and character interactions and I want you to know that you have written an amazing story despite the fact that I absolutely abhor the 2 mary sue bitch queens that apparantly can do no wrong and that ron is acting like a doormat too. Im usually a fan of harry and hermione but in this fic, I think that hermione is a total bitch and psychotic. She's clearly hostile to ron, and during all the times he got hurt or almost died, based on the context of what Im reading, she's definitely my main suspect as she and violet are always the people in proximity to him. Also even when he helped save her, her apology and thank you to ron after the troll incident is clearly forced and not meant at all. Her and violet are clearly not canon and gotten from a mary sue fanfic where ron was villainized to an unrealistic extent. Violet definitely looks like she knows wh
shadow patronus chapter 47 . 6/17
Hello, I recently found your story and was a little unsure of reading it, for the central place of Ron Weasley in the review. I have to say that this is a marvelous story, it blew my mind with the plot line. Thinking back, this is my first story that Harry or Hermione are not the main character.
I like the way you portray Ron and his many flaws and virtues and the complexity of the many families in the plot.
The last chapter was great as it gave me an excellent cliff hanger to want more.
Thanks for a nice Story.
Dareth chapter 47 . 6/11
This is surprisingly good.
demonicKitsune2 chapter 18 . 6/10
I love the story so far, great grammar, wonderful plot, a whole new view on every character, giving support characters spotlight and is really original. You should be giving other authors lessons. (Especially with how you didn’t make Ron OP)
I seriously have never read a Harry Potter story like this before.
(Love the Daphne/Ron dynamic!)
I have a feeling that Ron plan to destroy Riddle’s diary is going to backfire massively though (I sense the revealation that the diary wasn’t a horcrux this time around and he’s gonna get caught; I’m absolutely full of anticipation for what comes next!)
Please, please, please don’t ever give up on this story; it’s way too good to end without coming to a complete and definite ending.
Comrade Broseph chapter 47 . 6/9
Well this definitely shed some light on what the hell is going on. Even if I do have some entirely new questions to mule over over.
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