Reviews for The Red Knight |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have still hope someday u will update this story it's amazing and very well written |
![]() ![]() While not seeing the end of this story was literally the worst thing to ever happen ever, I'm really glad that you wrote this. You left it in a state where I as a reader could walk away satisfied, which I'm grateful for. This story was an absolute delight to read. I hope you keep writing in some way, as you clearly have a gift for it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Always bummed to get to the end of the road here. You wrote a compelling Ron Weasley. In my head he accomplishes everything and lives happily ever after with Valerie. Thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this fic, this last chapter was really interesting, and you got me at points were I was almost ready to inner yell at Ron for being too easy to give his trust, but this explains everything. Sad that it doesn't look like this fic is going to be finished, but still you did an amazing work. Be proud of it. And thank you for the read. |
![]() ![]() Thank you for sharing this story. Double thank you for ending on a chapter that explains most of what is going on. Yeah, it could count as a cliffhanger and it probably is but it's one about the overall structure of the story and thus leaves the reader to speculate instead of mindlessly wonder if the protagonists survive. So thank you for sharing at least this much of this story even if it is not completed. |
![]() ![]() Look you can say whatever you want but Trying to assasinate an eleven year old person because this person reminds you of your ex... is absolutely irrevocably evil. Worse two of the 3 times they tried there were other 11 year old kids in the danger zone. And arguably the troll counts too for being dangerous to other kids. Now if Ron had acted as he did in that other timeline then it could be almost excused. But they made it clear that he wasn't acting like that at all, which means they did not have cause to try and kill him. Seriously fuck them acting all sactimonious. If they owned up to it fine, but after this you are not the good guys anymore, so stop acting as if you were. Thank you for writing a story that makes me feel so strongly about something like this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Where can I possibly begin? Well first of all, you'll not be surprised to here me ask you to *please* finish this story. I never imagined that a Harry Potter fanfiction could come so close to the books themselves in positively enrapturing me. I read this story nonstop for days, just like I did with Deathly Hallows... SIXTEEN years ago? How time flies. You are amazing at surprising me. I thought I had this tale figured out a few times, but I was always delightfully caught off guard each time. For a long time, I thought that the whole reincarnation thing was the trio being forced to live out the lives of their counterparts in every Harry Potter fanfiction ever written, which was as meta and funny an idea as it was a horrifying thought. Maybe there will still end up being some truth to that, once the story continues to unfold, but at any rate I did NOT expect this high concept, high fantasy stuff. It's downright excellent. Not to mention the teasing sexuality of your story that never fails to, ya know, "push my buttons" in just the right ways. So wrong, yet so right. I had hoped for a more detailed and thorough description of Bellatrix's naked body, but it does make more sense narratively to avoid that, since Ron was trying to resist it at the time. Speaking of Ron, what an inspired choice of lead character! He gets too much crap in this fandom for no reason at all, and seeing a (sort of) fully fledged Ron musing on his canon past is yet another treat you've provided. Him calling out Granger's story and the ridiculous idea of him turning Hermione into a twistedly erotic sex slave feels like a well-deserved "take that!" to a certain subset of the Harry Potter fic writers that seem much more comfortable with themselves when Ron is portrayed as an irredeemable monster than a flawed, but fundamentally good, male character. I hope you are aware of how great this thing is that you have here, and I hope you come back to it soon. |
![]() ![]() ron was kind of ambitious cunning and he was jealous as well intelligent |
![]() ![]() unlike harry rons life wont be that bad granted he is a blood traitor but he didnt destroy the dark lorfd ir was vioekt maybe voldermort femalev oldermort was good here minsiter for magic raised by the flammels or slughorn or lbus dumbledore ron can fall in love with daphen tracey fleur gabriulle he takes arithmacy ancient runes dark arts healign legicimancy occulumacy or mancy elemental magic wasndeless mystic magic soul magic warding |
![]() ![]() He has broken bones and he is jumping around lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an interesting soul time transfer story. Multiple repeats with behavior changes, obliviations and cross purposes. I’m not usually a Ron fan, but I gave this a go and it hasn’t disappointed. Reasonable Bella and a damaged unreasonable Hermione, which apparently came from a formerly evil Ron. Thanks, Kali |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes hermione and violet must definetly remember the past lives but i dont understand why hermione is acting so pathetic and childish |
![]() ![]() ![]() what the hell is wrong with hermione. shes so unlikable what happend |
![]() ![]() ![]() fuck that toady frump (otherwise known as molly weasley) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i couldnt agree more |