Reviews for The Red Knight
Spidersauce chapter 40 . 6/14/2020
Ron's failing here is trying to include his friends in his meetings with Violet. They have no place there and are only messing things up. As well as being so fucking passive with Hermione. He needs to smack her back downif he acted like an actual Ron with no memories like he's trying to pull off he wouldn't be so infinitely forgiving towards her.
Spidersauce chapter 38 . 6/13/2020
In this, I disagree with his thought process. For all purposes, his Hermione is dead. Ron is widowed. Ron's dead wife either wants him to be happy, or her opinion on who he remarries to is irrelevant.
Spidersauce chapter 35 . 6/13/2020
If after this he still bows to the whims of the Greengrasses it'll have ruined the story. That's just far too pathetic.
Spidersauce chapter 33 . 6/13/2020
Ron is being a major fucking pussy here. He can get all the answers he needs by just not bending over for the Greengrasses. He is in very real danger here and he's just letting them throw him into the fire. He needs to stop letting them back off and just throw down and call them on it.
Spidersauce chapter 32 . 6/13/2020
I must say I don't really buy that an Auror/Unspeakable Ron married to Hermione and brother in law to Fleur wouldn't know a hell of a lot more French than yours does.
Spidersauce chapter 30 . 6/13/2020
How can Ron truly be this dense? Or is this denial? Not sure, but it's annoying to read, personally. I don't care if it's a teen who is dense, that's fine, but a reincarnated adult like this has no excuses.
Spidersauce chapter 29 . 6/13/2020
Wonder if Violet will be in the competition with him.
Spidersauce chapter 26 . 6/13/2020
I disagree with not telling them. It seems like he could convince Violet pretty easily, and honestly Hermione just needs to be obliviated at this point.
Spidersauce chapter 23 . 6/13/2020
I bet the lacking magical core is what the Hat was talking about with Ron not having fully transitioned yet.
Spidersauce chapter 16 . 6/13/2020
Why are they trying to kill you? Because you have different previous lives, idiot.
Spidersauce chapter 14 . 6/13/2020
Yep. Violetmione took Scabbers and put that into action, and are continuing to try and kill Ron.
My guess is that magic that Ron and Snape noticed will make pensieve memories not work, so they can't see who threw the ingredient.
Spidersauce chapter 13 . 6/13/2020
So I thought so at Quidditch, and seems more so here. Hermione is who is trying to kill Ron, I can't quite tell yet if Violet is in on it though.
Spidersauce chapter 8 . 6/13/2020
I'm guessing Hermione and Violet are reincarnated from a different world(s) than Ron. Hermione hates Ron because of what the Ron did to her in that world, Violet is more neutral because she had a third, different, Ron. They stared at his wand because they remember him with a different one.
Also, Violet can't be that confident as a normal 11 year old raised by the Dursley's as she was. Combined with Ron being The Third, by the hat, implies two other reincarnates.
Shall be interesting to see how far off I am.
Spidersauce chapter 6 . 6/13/2020
I'm not liking Violet or Hermione so far. Seem like rather terrible people so far. Hermione, for being a prejudiced bitch. Violet for helping her be so.
Random User chapter 1 . 6/11/2020
It's a shame that such a good fanfiction was abandoned
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