|Reviews for The Red Knight|
| Guest chapter 47 . 3/13
Thank you for sharing this story.
Double thank you for ending on a chapter that explains most of what is going on.
Yeah, it could count as a cliffhanger and it probably is but it's one about the overall structure of the story and thus leaves the reader to speculate instead of mindlessly wonder if the protagonists survive.
So thank you for sharing at least this much of this story even if it is not completed.
| Guest chapter 23 . 3/12
Look you can say whatever you want but
Trying to assasinate an eleven year old person because this person reminds you of your ex...
is absolutely irrevocably evil.
Worse two of the 3 times they tried there were other 11 year old kids in the danger zone.
And arguably the troll counts too for being dangerous to other kids.
Now if Ron had acted as he did in that other timeline then it could be almost excused.
But they made it clear that he wasn't acting like that at all, which means they did not have cause to try and kill him.
Seriously fuck them acting all sactimonious.
If they owned up to it fine, but after this you are not the good guys anymore, so stop acting as if you were.
Thank you for writing a story that makes me feel so strongly about something like this.
| thereallegend123 chapter 47 . 3/12
Where can I possibly begin? Well first of all, you'll not be surprised to here me ask you to *please* finish this story. I never imagined that a Harry Potter fanfiction could come so close to the books themselves in positively enrapturing me. I read this story nonstop for days, just like I did with Deathly Hallows... SIXTEEN years ago? How time flies. You are amazing at surprising me. I thought I had this tale figured out a few times, but I was always delightfully caught off guard each time. For a long time, I thought that the whole reincarnation thing was the trio being forced to live out the lives of their counterparts in every Harry Potter fanfiction ever written, which was as meta and funny an idea as it was a horrifying thought. Maybe there will still end up being some truth to that, once the story continues to unfold, but at any rate I did NOT expect this high concept, high fantasy stuff. It's downright excellent.
Not to mention the teasing sexuality of your story that never fails to, ya know, "push my buttons" in just the right ways. So wrong, yet so right. I had hoped for a more detailed and thorough description of Bellatrix's naked body, but it does make more sense narratively to avoid that, since Ron was trying to resist it at the time.
Speaking of Ron, what an inspired choice of lead character! He gets too much crap in this fandom for no reason at all, and seeing a (sort of) fully fledged Ron musing on his canon past is yet another treat you've provided. Him calling out Granger's story and the ridiculous idea of him turning Hermione into a twistedly erotic sex slave feels like a well-deserved "take that!" to a certain subset of the Harry Potter fic writers that seem much more comfortable with themselves when Ron is portrayed as an irredeemable monster than a flawed, but fundamentally good, male character.
I hope you are aware of how great this thing is that you have here, and I hope you come back to it soon.
| suraj chapter 10 . 2/27
ron was kind of ambitious cunning and he was jealous as well intelligent
| suraj chapter 9 . 2/27
unlike harry rons life wont be that bad granted he is a blood traitor but he didnt destroy the dark lorfd ir was vioekt maybe voldermort femalev oldermort was good here minsiter for magic raised by the flammels or slughorn or lbus dumbledore ron can fall in love with daphen tracey fleur gabriulle he takes arithmacy ancient runes dark arts healign legicimancy occulumacy or mancy elemental magic wasndeless mystic magic soul magic warding
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/3
He has broken bones and he is jumping around lol.
| Kali-blue chapter 29 . 1/2
This is an interesting soul time transfer story. Multiple repeats with behavior changes, obliviations and cross purposes. I’m not usually a Ron fan, but I gave this a go and it hasn’t disappointed. Reasonable Bella and a damaged unreasonable Hermione, which apparently came from a formerly evil Ron. Thanks, Kali
| gemini shawty chapter 13 . 12/10/2022
yes hermione and violet must definetly remember the past lives but i dont understand why hermione is acting so pathetic and childish
| gemini shawty chapter 11 . 12/10/2022
what the hell is wrong with hermione. shes so unlikable what happend
| gemini shawty chapter 9 . 12/10/2022
fuck that toady frump (otherwise known as molly weasley)
| gemini shawty chapter 7 . 12/10/2022
i couldnt agree more
| gemini shawty chapter 6 . 12/10/2022
i dont particularly like violet and new hermione. is the horcrux more active in violet, because she reminded me of tom riddle. or is it just adult harry having too much fun in his new body
| gemini shawty chapter 5 . 12/10/2022
| Guest chapter 26 . 10/21/2022
Ron in this is more Pathetic than the original..
| loca1h0st chapter 47 . 9/22/2022
Great story telling and great narrative. Most fanfic revolve around they original work. Yours moved from this parameters and give the AU its own flavor and story. I’m truly in an AU in those one
Thanks great cliffhanger to end with or a starting point for you to make it more. Either way thank you for the fictional escape and the great adventure