Reviews for The Red Knight
Tsamwan chapter 47 . 8/30/2022
This story just keeps getting better and better. The early chapters involving children's banter were a little awkward, but can easily be fixed in post-editing. And the later chapters! Those are orders of magnitude above the other stories on this site. You've managed to make your story a memorable one! One of the best fanfics I've ever read, without a doubt.

(some advice to help you get over that writer's block if you still have it: writer's block for stories is often caused when the conflict between important characters is resolved. What really works in this story is how Ron is constantly in that limbo between rejection and acceptance. but, now that Violet knows Ron's not a sadistic killer, that conflict has nearly resolved itself, with perhaps only a few more chapters to resolve it fully. For you, as a writer, acceptance and the deepening of their relationship might look like the only thing left to write about, which you (as a writer) might not find enough of a reason to keep writing for. My suggestion: Don't be afraid of throwing Ron back in limbo and rejecting the sh*t out of him. Perhaps said rejection might come from a different character? You've got plenty of characters to do it with, thanks to great writing.)
InkedWithStardust chapter 18 . 7/13/2022
ah you lost me here lol bye
InkedWithStardust chapter 16 . 7/13/2022
Interesting that Ron calls her Granger now and not Hermione. I wish you had explored more on Ron's feelings about Hermione supposedly being the one out to kill him- he lived a life where they were in love, married and had a family with kids surely this has to hurt him
InkedWithStardust chapter 14 . 7/13/2022
Snape felt it too so at least Ron wouldn't be blamed for it.
Also Violet must have snatched Scabbers in the train- hence chocolate frog instead of the rat in hsi pocket- and used it for Bella.
I wonder how hermione felt with this new bella?
InkedWithStardust chapter 13 . 7/12/2022
SO they were shocked to see Pandora alive!
InkedWithStardust chapter 12 . 7/12/2022
So Ron is the main character lol I wonder if it was saving Pandora that brought him on someone's radar which made the other two keep their distance from him?
InkedWithStardust chapter 11 . 7/12/2022
So Harry and Hermione did come back, Harry perfectly reincarnated with all memories intact, Hermione probably had some issue which made her associate ron with bad vibes? And so Violet is trying to shield Hermione from whatever trauma she is regressing to while also keeping things as similar to past life as possible?
InkedWithStardust chapter 10 . 7/12/2022
I'm not sure if i should be loving all the innuendos Ron is throwing at the 11 year olds or be scandalized. I must say, your Ron is very similar to how I think young Remus would be
InkedWithStardust chapter 7 . 7/12/2022
ok so both harry and hermione came back and transitioned fully into weird hermione and violet but ron's reincaration is incomplete?
But that does sound a bit too obvious, and given that almost everybody was sorted by now, maybe the other two are diff ppl?
ngl this is my first slytherin ron and fem!harry fic so i'm apprehensive hehe
as long as ron is treated right, I'll go in with an open mind
Innes Tahtinen chapter 24 . 7/12/2022
Your writing style is really easy to binge, I've been reading for maybe 2 hours and I'm at chapter 24. It's nice in comparison to others on this site, where (a hypothetical) you might get bogged down.
Ashtar29 chapter 47 . 6/15/2022
I'm wondering what happened to this story. I'm pretty hyped for whatever happens next but we know how life is, sometimes things disappear and never come back again. Still, I'll be waiting.
Lord Zendikar chapter 47 . 5/25/2022
I really enjoyed this story. I hope you come back at some point to finish it.
wolfwind42 chapter 13 . 5/5/2022
The hat saying Ron was the third one. Hermione being surprised the Luna’s mom is alive. The fact that Violet looked angry at the mention of Scabbers at the beginning of this fic. Both Violet and Hermione are from the future too. Probably an alternate future. They’re from the same future though given how they obviously knew each other before. In this future Ron is probably on the dark side given how Hermione hates him and Violet said that “he wasn’t make this easy.”

Violet saying this also means they’re the ones trying to kill him, probably because he brings back Voldemort or starts an apocalypse or something. This is aided by the fact that both attempts on his life could have been Violet and Hermione. They could have warded the door since they were right there. They could have cut Ron’s broom in half because Violet was right next to him when racing.

The fact that Hermione hates him especially probably means they were in a relationship but Ron betrayed them, much like Pettigrew. I also think that in their timeline Violet was killed first, then Hermione given how Hermione was so clingy. Might have been Ron himself, further aiding on why Hermione hates him so much. Violet might have made peace and realized that this Ron hasn’t done any of that evil things yet but Hermione can’t let it go.

This is my theory. I could be completely wrong, but I don’t think so.
Elly chapter 28 . 5/3/2022
Ugh I can't read anymore. Ron needs to stop being a simp to the girls. It's disgusting to read.
PaddleStroke chapter 1 . 4/8/2022
Your writing style is nice and it's nice to read. But the plot line is terrible. There isn't a plot line actually.
Spoiler alert:
On the first meeting between ron and hermione/violet it's already clear that they are reborn and from a universe where Ron was a moron. Which makes you think that in the coming chapters they'll confront about it and some cool stuff will happen. But no. Oooh no.

On the first assassination attempt it's very obious who did it.

On the second attempt with the troll it becomes painfully obvious. I almost stopped right there, but thought, come on they'll talk and the plot will move to something interesting. But no. It just keep on and on. They discuss only at the very end.
End which is also totally what the hell by the way.
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