| Reviews for Unsteady |
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  Marymary123 chapter 45 . 12/1/2024 This is the end of 2024. Really good story |
| Guest chapter 42 . 8/24/2024 As if Barack, true fiction Other than the cameo. This was a good crime story. Nicely executed. |
 desicotton chapter 1 . 7/19/2024 This story had me hooked from the opening. I love stories where Bella and Edward start off hostile towards each other then slowly transition to lovers. Some things didn’t make sense to me and the story could’ve ended a few chapters sooner. My favorite part of this story was that I could visual everything in the story. I felt for the characters. I loved how Edward slowly recognized he was falling for Bella and how scary it was for him to admit it even to himself. |
| dearedwardc chapter 45 . 7/10/2024 oh that was absolutely a beautiful story! I love it so much. I’m not sure if I have left a comment before, because I was here when the story wasn’t finished and I remember putting it on my favorite twilight fic list before life got in the way (lol) I just came back recently to read from the start and let me tell you this: I was HOOKED from the beginning. Literally. I finished it in two days I think? I’m sooo in love with the plot and the happy ending they got. Thank you so much for writing this! |
| dearedwardc chapter 39 . 7/9/2024 oh my god the last few chapters were INTENSE! I can’t help but wonder what Bella’s biological parents are up to lol are they even aware of the danger their daughter was in? XD |
| dearedwardc chapter 19 . 7/9/2024 Oh I see what Carlisle is doing there… he might be following Esme’s steps in matchmaking lol |
| JaysWorld2 chapter 45 . 10/16/2023 This was such an amazingly good story. Well written, intriguing, thrilling, heartbreaking, scary and healing. Thank you for sharing |
| farkaskriszta chapter 45 . 9/22/2023 I had the chance to finally read this story and I am so glad I did. I enjoyed it immensely. Your characters were special and a bit out of the norm. I especially liked super smart, intelligent Bella and morose kept-to-himself Edward. Their banter and verbal sparring were the best part of this beautiful passionate romance. Definitely goes to my reread folder. :) |
| Toni Masen chapter 45 . 4/9/2023 Wowsers! What a story. I had tears, smiles, laughter and a pounding heart, as for the cliffies well they had me swiping NEXT in a jiffy. Fantastic story, well done. |
| YukimuraRika chapter 45 . 4/5/2023 Hi there. I’m reading this is the year 2023. I grew up on this site, twilight (the movie) came out when I was in 7th gradeI’ve been hooked on its FF ever since. I’ve read hundreds of stories over the past 13 since thenI just wanted to let you know, yours has warmed my heart in a way it hasn’t been in a long time. I’m glad I found this gem. Thank you for sharing this with us! Hope you are well x |
| whoknows211 chapter 45 . 3/2/2023 Absolutely loved it! |
| FrustratedLawStudent chapter 42 . 1/27/2023 Gallivanting all over the world sounds amazing! Also, what is the age difference between Edward and Bella? i don't think it was mentioned. also, when is the story happening? like 2016-2018? if it is, this is the funniest chapter! |
| FrustratedLawStudent chapter 41 . 1/27/2023 this is one of the sweetest and most romantic things he ever said to her! they are doing remarkably well without professional help... can't wait to see what's next |
| FrustratedLawStudent chapter 35 . 1/27/2023 yeah just shooting the bastards and letting Feds and CPD deal with the fallout sounds like a mighty fine idea |
| FrustratedLawStudent chapter 32 . 1/27/2023 why, oh why?! is Edward psychic or something with that dream of his? |