Reviews for White
TheKeeperoftheMeow chapter 1 . 10/9/2021
That wedding dress sounds beautiful.
297699767660 chapter 17 . 3/13/2021
i swear i'm not crying. my eyes are just sweating. no they are actual tears ㅠㅠ

i think i will never move on from the way he cherishes Mai. man they're so in love with each other my heart hurts. and sex-after-marriage is truly underrated. it's healthy too. so i fully support their wise decision to wait until they're married. hell yeah!

listen i know i've said this so many times but god i love the way you write Naru. his speech is beautiful, your honor
297699767660 chapter 16 . 3/13/2021
Naru and Mai really made me cry this chapter. they're so in love, your honor
297699767660 chapter 15 . 3/13/2021
ngl John's prayer made me tear up. what a ball of sunshine. we all need a friend like him. do we just befriend a priest then?

i miss John so bad, we need him here
297699767660 chapter 12 . 3/13/2021
Naru is there as she goes through all that humiliation and he still loves her. girl, marry him.

297699767660 chapter 11 . 3/13/2021
oh god it was just a vision. doesn't make it less scarier though. and the previous chapter is still the hardest chapter to read.
297699767660 chapter 9 . 3/13/2021
i love that Mai can get anyone to befriend her and make them comfortable enough to answer to her questions

though i do think Mai should really be careful around that Swii guy (?) wait i forgot his name. You can never be too careful in that kind of place where unreported rape crimes are so high
297699767660 chapter 8 . 3/13/2021
this is breaking my heart ㅠㅠ

the thing about them is that Mai is always sympathetic, and often her emotions get the best of her, ans her temper is also short (probably why Naru reprimands her a lot). On the other hand Naru has so little trust in what Mai does when she can speak for herself and is the type who acts out on her feelings. If she feels like slapping someone when she's offended then she will slap someone (well on this case it proved useful since the cop was doing it on purpose), but Naru doesn't like that, and his reprimanding can get a bit too much, as if Mai can't make her own choices.

i hope they work it out soon though this is breaking my heart
297699767660 chapter 7 . 3/13/2021
nah but the slap is necessary.
297699767660 chapter 3 . 3/13/2021
what the hell. even i am blushing to his last two texts. what the hell. why can't every man be like this?
297699767660 chapter 2 . 3/13/2021
back at it again with embarassed Naru, yes, my weakness
297699767660 chapter 1 . 3/13/2021
oh god not another cheating shenanigans... i can already imagine the misunderstandings etc etc waaaahhhh
Undertheskys chapter 17 . 1/14/2018
Good story. I cant wait to read the sequel
Undertheskys chapter 14 . 1/14/2018
Oh no
Undertheskys chapter 10 . 1/14/2018
Ohh noo MAI!
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