|Reviews for Canon Patchworking with Uchiha Ren|
| majikss chapter 1 . 3/15
ao3 has the same problems lmao
| zuyiko wolf chapter 1 . 1/27
Turn from sin and turn to God
Thank The Lord Jesus Christ we can be forgiven
Have a good day
| Yandere Heart chapter 1 . 1/24
AO3 suffers the same problems and more lol. What?
| DavidTorpid chapter 1 . 1/9
it always sparks joy when someone who is stealing someone else's intellectual property throws a shit fit when someone then steals their intellectual property.
| Chloenette chapter 1 . 12/30/2022
But I don't like AO3 :(
| Izuku chapter 1 . 12/30/2022
The rampant thievery?
| WizardFoxAngel chapter 1 . 12/29/2022
OK thx for telling us
| ZeroSpearow chapter 1 . 12/28/2022
looks like you never read the terms of service of this site
| The Cat's Paw chapter 1 . 12/28/2022
I totally get it. Two of my stories were stolen, and they were only removed on ff because I called out the thief here and on AO3.
| mikan26 chapter 1 . 12/28/2022
omgggg im so mad at the person copying your work especially since ur writing is soo good juat out of query will u still post on wattpad
| Ikooo chapter 1 . 12/28/2022
It's sad that you're leaving FF. But I understand, I'm glad that the story will continued on another page. I'm waiting for the next chapter on AO3. I hope not for long :D
| Runyon Gaetz chapter 1 . 12/28/2022
Sad to see it go but I understand. I know I have reported a copy of this story. See you on AO3!
| Prosim chapter 89 . 12/28/2022
Chci konec prosím
| Lesserafim chapter 40 . 11/8/2022
This doesn't make sense, I like the story, but you don't know what you write most of the time about your own characters, especially with the ages of the characters (which you change every two chapters as if you forgot what you wrote before). For example at the beginning of the story Sasuke was 8 years old, that is the age he was when the massacre happened, Ren was 11 years old so the age difference is only 3 years and a few months. Konohamaru was 3 years old, a few months passed and Ren turned 12, at that time she commented that Konohamaru was 4 (so we can assume that it was his birthday during Ren's stay at her house), a few weeks later it was Ren's 8th birthday. Sakura, so she would reach Sasuke's age, so I'm assuming that even though they were born in the same year, Sasuke is at least half a year older than Sakura, maybe even a little more. Then Ren goes to the chunin exams and you said that Deidara was 3 years older than Sasuke, so if Sasuke is 8 years old, Deidara should be 11 years old (meaning a year younger than Ren or even just a few months younger depending on the date of birthday), now Ren is back in the village and thinks that Sasuke is a prodigy for awakening the Sharingan at 6 years old! when he is 8 years old, almost 9! According to you, Ren woke him up when he was 7 years old. The 3 year age difference also makes sense when you talk about Ren having heard from the adults of his clan that Naruto was the vessel of the fox and that he was the son of the fourth, which makes sense because it could be discussed shortly after the attack like this that Naruto would be newborn and Ren would only be 3 almost 4 years old. I started to suspect that you didn't remember the age of your characters when Hana and Ren kept talking about Sasori as a little boy, when he's only supposed to be a year younger than them, but I said hmm maybe it's because he's smaller than normal and very cute, but no, it's because you forgot the real ages. (it's not just Hana talking at the beginning about wanting to pass and then saying the opposite shortly after, or age, there are several things that have not had continuity, the funny thing is that you made an author's note criticizing Kishi's continuity but the yours is worse because they are with main characters in the current story) Anyway, I hope you take care of those aspects for future stories, you are a good writer with a lot of potential, and the parody is very funny to read, but the lack of continuity is something very annoying of read because the reader gets a mental idea of how things are, the characters, etc. and if you keep changing it from time to time, it is difficult to keep track and imagine the characters and the contexts of the relationships well.
| kidloco chapter 89 . 11/4/2022
love you job, continue please