Reviews for The Entertainer
Castiel317 chapter 36 . 7/14
I liked the story, but I do agree with you that the ending conflict was a little lack luster when compared with your other work. To be fair though, it still beats damn near anyone else's works. Your worst has been better than many peoples best, take that as you will. Unfortunately I wont start Service or Captain until they are finished or damn near, I already made the mistake of catching up with White Sheep... Never again!
Castiel317 chapter 8 . 7/10
I wont lie I kinda wish the meaning of the last name "White" would have been a reveal to the other characters as well. I think it would have been a more engaging conversation, to late now, but im not the writer. Still good though.
Castiel317 chapter 1 . 7/6
Okay, I am at this one now. I have heard from a few of my friends about this story and they all spoke good of it so im giving it a try. I came to this after finishing Stress Relief and I am glad the start chapter was light hearted, I needed that after the ending of Stress Relief.
Ozpinteron chapter 3 . 6/29
I think I'd like Jaune Snow better...
VeryPeeved chapter 5 . 6/23
it's like I've always said: pornography is the highest form of art.
lucasrosa94 chapter 1 . 6/4
vou ler.
Ventusblade chapter 1 . 5/31
Despite your dissatisfaction with this fic, I found it highly enjoyable. Your original plot sounded really intriguing, but oh well; we still got a well written romance story regardless.
Mab's Mad Fiddler chapter 21 . 5/30
Again, I will mourn the fact that I have yet to run into a fic that honestly pairs Pyrrha and Jaune. It says something when even the top rated fan fictions don't let her win that battle.
Mab's Mad Fiddler chapter 5 . 5/30
Ah fuck. Well, thee goes any potential for Jaune and Yang to have a normal relationship. His perception of her will always be colored by this moment right here.
Mab's Mad Fiddler chapter 2 . 5/30
Huh. Well, I get the feeling Confident Jaune is going to make it a problem for him to be A): Pyrrha's partner, and B): Team JNPR period.
brokenstrings001 chapter 1 . 5/25
Damn thats hot! JAUNE? Freaking Jaune? I knew some stories portray him as a dance master but this is unique.
Alithe Cambre chapter 1 . 5/16
Can I just say- 6/7 of the top finished RWBY stories (sorted by favourites) are written by you. You are amazing. Thank you so much for all you do and for all these stories that I love so much!
246vili chapter 36 . 4/16
Well, it was good story. Poor Nina, not having the chance to do her duty to embarrass the two love birds while the're "cooing".
246vili chapter 31 . 4/14
Finally Yang found out. Now the true question is: will they be able to sort this shitstorm out?
246vili chapter 29 . 4/8
Finally they're going somewhere with their feelings for each other. Looking forward to see how will it turn out.
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