|Reviews for Crushed|
| OblongCreamPuff chapter 3 . 7/13/2017
Yay! You updated! Looks like things are really going to get moving now - I wonder what Rhett will have to say about Bonnie's crush? Will he finally discipline her if she keeps bothering Wade? (Although, I would understand if he weren't in the story at all.) One thing I noticed is that Scarlett and Rhett had different bedrooms not long after Bonnie was born, so they wouldn't share the same bed and Bonnie wouldn't know about Rhett holding Scarlett after a nightmare. There are also some minor proofreading errors, but I'm sure you can fix those easily.
I like Wade's hiding place. I never thought about the house having an attic (or a basement). Hope you're planning on continuing!
| Delia Lavender chapter 2 . 4/6/2017
If I remember my GWTW correctly, Bonnie and Wade would be very young in your story. A crush on "big brother" or "daddy" is not unusual for such a little girl. I do hope you continue...although I can just imagine how sad it will be if events happen as they did in the novel. In any case, your story is nicely written and terribly cute!
| OblongCreamPuff chapter 2 . 3/19/2017
I have to admit I was little put off by the premise, thinking that this would take place when a somehow alive Bonnie and Wade were grown up, but after reading it I find it very cute! I love the way that you write the kids. I always wondered about Bonnie's relationship to her siblings; the book never really shows her interacting with them. I would love to see you continue!
| Adlade chapter 1 . 10/2/2016
This beginning of history is really great! I adored it, and I look very much forward to reading the continuation, suite. The idea is exceptional and I am delighted to have discovered your narrative.
Sorry for the restricted language, I am French.
Are you going to continue?
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
this is all sorts of wtf - writing is good but the story idea is too out there lol... especially if they are children and if they aren't children this is for the incest xxx category on a porn site
| sj372419 chapter 1 . 9/14/2016
How old is Bonnie and how old is Wade? This is a little wierd to me, I'm sorry.