Draco in this chapter was really brought to life, and his mother too.

What a cliffhanger to be stuck on! I've really enjoyed this one too, just as much as Pearl. I'm enjoying Daph and Harry slowly growing closer as the bond/tether continues to push them together. I like the Neville/Astoria pairing as well. Really hope you have time to continue your stories soon as they're really lovely and I'd love to see where you're going with them both.

Chapter 12. This would be a good time to point out that nothing is really happening in your story but conversations, that are usually cut short for the sake of prolonging the reveal, without a natural reason, resulting in similar conversations repeating themselves.
I feel a hard outline by chapter could help you move the story along.

Finished Chapter 8. So far Daphne is an awful person and Harry is the wimp who thanks her for being terrible.
So far Harry is being set up to be repeatedly bullied by Daphne only to then act “riotously offend” when someone questions Daphne’s poor behavior.

4/2022

To bad it has not been updated since 2018, I keep checking every year or so.

Great story

More please

please update

Yuck

LMAOOOOO
That smack was resounding :)

His argument for the conversation part was weak. Granted he really should’nt believe it he still does at this point yet his reasons for the guilt aren’t very good. What I’m trying to say is that instead of the guilt of being the only one that could stop it and engineering the battle to take place at hogwarts it’s more like “just” survivor’s guilt. His stance isn’t really strong and he conceded a bit too quick for my tastes.

“Luke this twice” lol. It signed the first time. Not a huge leap to imagine her doing it again.

Great story

Under no circumstances is Draco Malfoy redeemable. And trying to pair him with Hermione is SICK.

Please don’t stop this incredible story, I love it.

A French reader

Great story!