Reviews for A Fateful Walk |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really wish you would finish this fantasticly original story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's truly disappointing that such an wonderful story stopped from continuing. I hope you are ok? Try to finish it please. It's one of my top ten favorite Harry/Daphne fic. Whatever, Thanks still for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, sad to see it seems like it won’t be continued. |
![]() ![]() Will you be continuing with your stories, both are are among my best top 10 Harry and Daphne fics? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Every time I think there is a new chapter I read this story again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story is interesting and intriguing. I've quite enjoyed it. Hopefully you will find your mojo and carry on. Would love to know if Harry and Daphne's magic balance, and why the aurors weren't ever around when needed at Hogwarts, if Neville and Astoria ever wake up, and how they all come together for the next year of school. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You had Daphne drawing her wand... Was it HER wand? Or, was it Harry's? because i thought her wand was evil. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Curious why Harry and Daphne haven't mentioned being attacked to anyone. An alarm should be out that everyone should take care. It's just odd. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You kinda just made Harry explode here for no reason. There wasn’t really any filling the keg with black powder or lighting a fuse. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really wish you had continued the story, it was really solid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The previous version, before the rewrite, was amazing. This version is more flowing, also great. I wait until the end of this fic to give another review. |
![]() ![]() I so hope that you haven’t completely abandoned this, as it is such a brilliant story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Draco in this chapter was really brought to life, and his mother too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a cliffhanger to be stuck on! I've really enjoyed this one too, just as much as Pearl. I'm enjoying Daph and Harry slowly growing closer as the bond/tether continues to push them together. I like the Neville/Astoria pairing as well. Really hope you have time to continue your stories soon as they're really lovely and I'd love to see where you're going with them both. |
![]() ![]() Chapter 12. This would be a good time to point out that nothing is really happening in your story but conversations, that are usually cut short for the sake of prolonging the reveal, without a natural reason, resulting in similar conversations repeating themselves. I feel a hard outline by chapter could help you move the story along. |