Reviews for Heart over Mind |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You did not butcher the Arabic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what a fun chapter (yes ik someone died but bdnxns.. vv well written!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "youre going to miss heryes i do belive i will" I INSTANTLY GUSH ANSNSN AAWW |
![]() ![]() ![]() the graduation scene and transition into a new chapter in their lives was so well written and well paced! i have to say, this is the first ff ive read where yes, there was a seed of affection or hint to a relationship planted while in hogwarts, but which would progress beyond the castle walls.. usually the war would be going on and hermione would have to resprt to staying at hogwarts or teaching or something that would keep her in the vicinity of severus as an apprentice or some other circumstance.. but i love love this new plot! its very refreshing i love that hermione gets to go to uni haha .. also that snape isnt compelled (by magic itself or otherwise) to be in a relationship with hermione as her teacher.. theres a guilty pleasure allure to student teacher pairings, but im really excited to see how hermione will grow into her own skin as an academicagain, i just wanna gush at your wonderful writing thank you for creating/maintainign a lovely dynamics between the trio (and not sacrificing it for sevmione lol), hermione and her professors, the granger family aa cute, snarky yet caring and snape (draco pls do well pls plsss) 33 .. and i do so love crookshanks uwu |
![]() ![]() I want to kill Lupun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's really interesting to read this story, I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read this story so many times, and I am always so mad at Remus' absolutely atrocious timing here! Gah! |
![]() ![]() I really enjoy the way the relationship between Hermione and Severus developed. Her family is delightful and I love the Midsummer ties. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Their letter writing is hilarious :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You se language beautifully |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! I absolutely adored reading this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice, wish there were more interactions between them, kind of disappointing but a good story nonetheless |
![]() ![]() This fanfiction is one of the most beautiful I've read in 8 years. It is sublime, faithful to each character and detailed to perfection. I'm so happy I got to read it. It's already been 17 years, if I'm not mistaken, since she came out. Despite small problems with Severus which is due to the fact that not all the films/books were in no way detracted from the fascinating story and originality of this fiction. THANKS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ginevra Weasley not Virginia. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would never guess this was a first time full length fiction. Your writing is GOOD. Well edited, good pacing, and so far everybody is in character. |