Peak Story, def kept me up until now lol. Tomas gotta get on that workout grind

Nice writing very descriptive :) good storytelling and imagery

what a crazy few scenes, truly the highlight of the story haha. Don't stick your dick in crazy!

Very nice chapter, love this story.

It's An Absolute Fabulous Story And I Can Say That I'm Hooked. I'm A Huge Fan Of Fallout And That I Can Hardly Wait Until You Post The Next Chapter.

I'm Thinking That The Reason Why Tom Survives The Assult Is Either That She Suddenly Realizes What She's Doing And Stops Herself Because She Knows That If she Really Did Kill Him. Then She'd Either Be Imprisoned In The Vault Or Kicked Out... Or
Maybe He Hits Her With The Pipboy Just Before Lapsing Unconscious..?

You Say That You Are Going To Focus More On Other Characters. I'm Hoping That You Will Be Focusing On Toms Mumm And Sister.
I Think That They Would Be Important To The Story As Well.

I'm thoroughly enjoying the story, it's very well written.

Reminder

This is so well written.i
It's such a novel and well-executed concept that i don't understand why it isn't being updated more often.

Gotta love the amount of edge lords (probably actual "edgy" teenagers) in the reviews thinking they are "more capable" protagonists when they likely are the ones to end up dead by the first chapter.

Oh, and that includes the annoying amount of evangelicals.

Shame that this fic has not been updated since Jan 2023 (at the time of writing), but some reviews did give good advice and questions about the short and long-term issues in this Vault.

Would there be a new balance enforced so that not too many women would be out of work to maintain the vault?

How about if there is growing concern about the population issues if too many get pregnant, or is this going to become a huge problem if too many older women get impregnated?

What about his mother and sister? Will they end up going into the most taboo route of having sex with their son/brother?

Perhaps the sister determined to wait for one of his potential sons to be old enough, despite being her nephew?

Will the mom be aching for sex given her husband is gone?

What about the possibility that some of Thomas' children end up stillborn/defective once the women he impregnated eventually give birth?

What about those chemicals and other crap in their food affecting Thomas and those of his age, young adults, and/or even younger as time goes on? Will there be unexpected mutations once puberty hits or even just their still-growing bodies start to change drastically even long after hitting puberty?

In fact; going back to that eventual pregnancy issue, how would the babies be affected if he impregnates the other girls of his age/slightly younger than him/ slightly older than him to be young adults when considering their bodies being affected since they are still rather young?

This is Fallout, after all, so any "logic" of RL does not apply in this post-apocalypse universe.

Either way, I hope you eventually return to continue this fic so we see what happens after Thomas likely gets rescued, or barely manages to get Maria off him. Then perhaps the consequences once he suddenly gets a wake-up call of how he went too far and any other ways the aftermath would show. Let alone how Maria's daughter would feel if she either did not care or was legitimately horrified despite her poor relationship with her mother.

And what about Thomas' childhood friend? His family? Would there be consequences in their relationship with him? Let alone with the rest of the Vault?

So many questions with so many possible outcomes.

Again, I hope you eventually continue this fic, as there have not been that many Vault 69 fanfics out there, and your interpretation, especially with the only male being so young, is the best in my opinion.

Yeah, I can’t see a young man who is 16 years old be distressed at the fact that he gets to have sex with any girl he wants out of 999 females. This is just an anime harem protagonist all over again. Stupid tropes

I enjoyed your writing. I could understand the characters motivations and the world you envisioned. I especially like the contrast of characteristics between Tom’s vaultmates.

This is really good. There aren't that many vaul 69 fics out there. Please update this soon

Ok, if nobody else will say it I will:
When does he bang his family?

This is a great read. You need to write more I'm hooked. I read all 14 chapters in 2 days. Please I beg you write more ASAP!

While it has been over a year since you updated this story I hope you will update it at some point cause your have done a really good job so far. The story line is well written along with the characters of course it is hard to get a sense of scale of how many people are in the vault but that is understandable given you can only write and keep track of so many characters.