Reviews for The Debt
elvander72 chapter 1 . 10/13
I love your work!
ReReading some of it now, for the umpteeth time.
Looking forward to your next HP story after Armoured Mage.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 1 . 9/12
Seeming like Hermione might not be a very liked character. Not just due to this story. Really not a fan of the super sexual Veela bit in any story. Must have sex daily just to function and will go mad if denied over a short time. Makes for a rather damning situation when hes an old man. A much shorter lifespan for her.

This was well done with a heck of an interesting twist. Not sure about the lack of going after the horcruxes though.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30
I have to tell you I appreciate this story. I always get annoyed with stories with Amelia bones saving everything. She’s a fucking politician she wouldn’t step out of line if it wasn’t a beneficial to her. I always think it’s funny that people think that she would help. She works in a ministry that is so corrupt. And that goes triple for Dumbledore to he is as corrupt as the rest of them. I know you try to make Dumbledore a decent person but Dumbledore is a fucking politician holding three powerful positions no manholes those kind of power without being corrupt corrupt in a little power-hungry.
Guciec chapter 1 . 7/29
Very nice story maybe a little of a stretch but nice. A good light read.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6
Fb
Guest chapter 1 . 7/2
What a muggle wank. Isn’t a fanfic without some “humanity fuck yeah” in it. You really think wizards can’t cast an anti-projectile charm? Come on now. They can hide a building in folded space time. If you think guns are a threat then you are being purposefully obstinate and author fiating it away
LtKettch chapter 1 . 6/22
Great story.
WhatHaveIDiscovered chapter 1 . 6/18
Enjoyable story. The ending felt a little rushed but that could just be me not wanting the story to end haha. Well done and thanks for sharing!
yochan123 chapter 1 . 4/12
wonderful oneshot! good ending and making these ppl muggles is just what they deserve
geenakmom chapter 1 . 3/19
Enjoyed reading this!
Jimbocous chapter 1 . 2/18
Thanks for a great read! Very nicely done.
starie78 chapter 1 . 2/12
Great story.
Incantations7 chapter 1 . 1/20
An interesting twist to the life debt plot device that was completely ignored by JKR…
C3nterF0ld chapter 1 . 12/20/2021
there's so much sass omfg lol
FriendlyFire59 chapter 1 . 12/11/2021
That was an interesting version of life debts.
Thanks for posting.
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