| Reviews for The Debt |
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   Goosefire chapter 1 . 11/18 A national life debt! How cool is that? |
| EliteShadow chapter 1 . 6/28 ROFL i loved this story please keep up the great work i look forward to reading more from you please! i also Really loved that last line to this story of where fleur's mother was fighting for harry's dream of private islands where she and fleur didnt need clothes ROFL i wish i could see harry's face at that part thanks for the story hope to read more form you soon! |
| Fabian Wood chapter 1 . 5/10 Good story |
| SunPho3n1x chapter 1 . 5/2 This was a very fun story. Thank you for writing this. |
| lukeanimelover chapter 1 . 4/8 This is so rushed… |
| terrahsims chapter 1 . 3/12 "Oh René!" |
| tedi.ingersollearthlink.net chapter 1 . 11/30/2023 aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazaqqqqq1mq |
| DanJ chapter 1 . 9/19/2023 This could just be the stupidest ass-pull in the history of utterly stupid ass-pulls: How the hell could they owe their lives to Harry, when toddler-Harry didn't actually do anything? How could an entire country owe their lives to him, when Voldemort most certainly would never have killed most of them - when in fact nobody's life but Harry's was in any immediate danger at the point, when Harry "did" (not by doing anything, but by merely existing) what allegedly created that ridiculous debt? If just probably, potentially or possibly saving someone's life, from something that may have occured at some point in the future, by doing nothing more than existing and having something randomly happen to you could create life debts, then everyone (including Harry) would owe dozens, hundreds or thousands of life debts to other people whom they, in many cases, have never met or even heard of. And then, on top of that utter stupidity, you claim that toddler-Harry somehow was utterly selfless, only thought about helping others (despite toddlers at that age usually being inherently selfish) - and that despite not even having the slightest understanding of what was going on at all? And that's completely ignoring how you turned Fudge from a politician, who would use typical, though somewhat extreme, political instruments to silence someone he considered a political opponent, into a raving maniac who would for no reason at all try to (and believe he would get away with it) murder the country's most popular celebrity. This fic is full of shit. And, if you don't see what utter crap you have created here, I guess so are you. And the fic had started with such an interesting premise too... All ruined. Thanks. Great job. |
| Odd chapter 1 . 8/31/2023 Just another muggle lover, "science is best" type bullshit story. |
| mumphie chapter 1 . 7/8/2023 Fun story, love the nod to 'Allo, ;Allo! |
| HalfBlood Prince chapter 1 . 5/29/2023 Succubu story next? :D |
| draco122 chapter 1 . 4/28/2023 Well done. Highly enjoyable. Draco122 |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/10/2023 Rh |
| Ruairi J.L chapter 1 . 3/9/2023 Amusing story, but I do have one complaint. I can't be expected to believe that Harry, at the age of fifteen, doesn't understand masturbation after living in a single-sex dorm for several years, especially when he seemingly knows what porn is. Vernon's warnings would have fallen on deaf ears to a teenager happy to escape that situation. |
| elvander72 chapter 1 . 10/13/2022 I love your work! ReReading some of it now, for the umpteeth time. Looking forward to your next HP story after Armoured Mage. |