|Reviews for The Debt|
| tedi.ingersollearthlink.net chapter 1 . 11/30
| DanJ chapter 1 . 9/19
This could just be the stupidest ass-pull in the history of utterly stupid ass-pulls:
How the hell could they owe their lives to Harry, when toddler-Harry didn't actually do anything? How could an entire country owe their lives to him, when Voldemort most certainly would never have killed most of them - when in fact nobody's life but Harry's was in any immediate danger at the point, when Harry "did" (not by doing anything, but by merely existing) what allegedly created that ridiculous debt? If just probably, potentially or possibly saving someone's life, from something that may have occured at some point in the future, by doing nothing more than existing and having something randomly happen to you could create life debts, then everyone (including Harry) would owe dozens, hundreds or thousands of life debts to other people whom they, in many cases, have never met or even heard of.
And then, on top of that utter stupidity, you claim that toddler-Harry somehow was utterly selfless, only thought about helping others (despite toddlers at that age usually being inherently selfish) - and that despite not even having the slightest understanding of what was going on at all?
And that's completely ignoring how you turned Fudge from a politician, who would use typical, though somewhat extreme, political instruments to silence someone he considered a political opponent, into a raving maniac who would for no reason at all try to (and believe he would get away with it) murder the country's most popular celebrity.
This fic is full of shit. And, if you don't see what utter crap you have created here, I guess so are you.
And the fic had started with such an interesting premise too... All ruined. Thanks. Great job.
| Odd chapter 1 . 8/31
Just another muggle lover, "science is best" type bullshit story.
| mumphie chapter 1 . 7/8
Fun story, love the nod to 'Allo, ;Allo!
| HalfBlood Prince chapter 1 . 5/29
Succubu story next? :D
| draco122 chapter 1 . 4/28
Well done. Highly enjoyable.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/10
| Ruairi J.L chapter 1 . 3/9
Amusing story, but I do have one complaint. I can't be expected to believe that Harry, at the age of fifteen, doesn't understand masturbation after living in a single-sex dorm for several years, especially when he seemingly knows what porn is. Vernon's warnings would have fallen on deaf ears to a teenager happy to escape that situation.
| elvander72 chapter 1 . 10/13/2022
I love your work!
ReReading some of it now, for the umpteeth time.
Looking forward to your next HP story after Armoured Mage.
| Re Lovely Lover chapter 1 . 9/12/2022
Seeming like Hermione might not be a very liked character. Not just due to this story. Really not a fan of the super sexual Veela bit in any story. Must have sex daily just to function and will go mad if denied over a short time. Makes for a rather damning situation when hes an old man. A much shorter lifespan for her.
This was well done with a heck of an interesting twist. Not sure about the lack of going after the horcruxes though.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2022
I have to tell you I appreciate this story. I always get annoyed with stories with Amelia bones saving everything. She’s a fucking politician she wouldn’t step out of line if it wasn’t a beneficial to her. I always think it’s funny that people think that she would help. She works in a ministry that is so corrupt. And that goes triple for Dumbledore to he is as corrupt as the rest of them. I know you try to make Dumbledore a decent person but Dumbledore is a fucking politician holding three powerful positions no manholes those kind of power without being corrupt corrupt in a little power-hungry.
| Guciec chapter 1 . 7/29/2022
Very nice story maybe a little of a stretch but nice. A good light read.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2022
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2022
What a muggle wank. Isn’t a fanfic without some “humanity fuck yeah” in it. You really think wizards can’t cast an anti-projectile charm? Come on now. They can hide a building in folded space time. If you think guns are a threat then you are being purposefully obstinate and author fiating it away
| LtKettch chapter 1 . 6/22/2022