Reviews for The Debt
Rebmul chapter 1 . 9/17/2016
again another great story from you I love harry fleur as a pairing I also love him with daphne I so cant wait for more from you till next time my friend
lordamnesia chapter 1 . 9/17/2016
I LOVE this idea! I've only seen something like this once before, and it wasn't even this well done! Fantastic work, as always, and thanks for the great read!
Ryszarius chapter 1 . 9/17/2016
Heh this was a fun little read, quite enjoyable. Looking forward to reading more stories by you in the future.
Bluesnowman chapter 1 . 9/17/2016
nice work
sanabalis chapter 1 . 9/17/2016
Oh, 'Allo 'Allo is a brilliant show. I shall zay dis only onse: Excellent story that made me laugh so much! Thank you so much!
Soul D Phoenix chapter 1 . 9/17/2016
Nice story, but it dropped a bit after Harry left to France. Am definitely looking forward to when you publish a new story!
TheWickedTruth89 chapter 1 . 9/17/2016
Great story
Eljin1 chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
i loved that show when i was a kid. didnt understand many of the jokes, but enjoyed it all the same.
AnFan-n-More chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
Very fun little read! I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for sharing it.
geetac chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
This story for which I've read is unusual for me but I liked it
rebfan90 chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
great story! i enjoyed it
JMK2 chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
Good story. Would honestly love to see Harry and Fleur go on adventures in the world of magic.
Thundramon chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
Decent fic, while slightly lacklustre compared to Ah Screw it, this one can stand on its own. :)

Loved how Snape was dealt with but the plot seems to fall flat after Harry leaves Britain for France. The tension dropped quite a bit.

Harry seemed too innocent for a 15 year old, not even knowing what sex is. But he was stone cold while dealing with Snape & his dialogues with Sirius were funny.

Fleur did not get enough screen time here to be a character in her own right but I enjoyed the restaurant scene in Ah Screw it.

Honestly I should be reviewing this fic but I keep comparing it to Ah Screw it because I really loved that story. Sorry about that. I think it's because Ah Screw it has been on my mind for so long. Anyways

I have read all your other HP Stories & I found 'Ah Screw it' to be an amazing fic. I have read & reread it 4 times now. It is simply amazing.

I really enjoyed this fic as well though I wish Wizarding Britain was punished more especially Fudge & Umbridge. I am also unhappy Dumbledore skipped out on punishment both in here & in Ah, Screw it.

Dumbledore let Harry be abused & refused to consider any alternative. He planned for Harry to die & refused to give him anything worth living for. I enjoy good!Albus but I hope you write a fic where Dumbles gets what he deserves for what he did to Harry.
Tribernator chapter 1 . 9/16/2016
Well that story escalated quickly lol. Awesome setup and it went a direction I have never read before. Well done man!
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