Seeming like Hermione might not be a very liked character. Not just due to this story. Really not a fan of the super sexual Veela bit in any story. Must have sex daily just to function and will go mad if denied over a short time. Makes for a rather damning situation when hes an old man. A much shorter lifespan for her.

This was well done with a heck of an interesting twist. Not sure about the lack of going after the horcruxes though.

I have to tell you I appreciate this story. I always get annoyed with stories with Amelia bones saving everything. She’s a fucking politician she wouldn’t step out of line if it wasn’t a beneficial to her. I always think it’s funny that people think that she would help. She works in a ministry that is so corrupt. And that goes triple for Dumbledore to he is as corrupt as the rest of them. I know you try to make Dumbledore a decent person but Dumbledore is a fucking politician holding three powerful positions no manholes those kind of power without being corrupt corrupt in a little power-hungry.

Very nice story maybe a little of a stretch but nice. A good light read.

Fb

What a muggle wank. Isn’t a fanfic without some “humanity fuck yeah” in it. You really think wizards can’t cast an anti-projectile charm? Come on now. They can hide a building in folded space time. If you think guns are a threat then you are being purposefully obstinate and author fiating it away

Great story.

Enjoyable story. The ending felt a little rushed but that could just be me not wanting the story to end haha. Well done and thanks for sharing!

wonderful oneshot! good ending and making these ppl muggles is just what they deserve

Enjoyed reading this!

Thanks for a great read! Very nicely done.

Great story.

An interesting twist to the life debt plot device that was completely ignored by JKR…

there's so much sass omfg lol

That was an interesting version of life debts.
Thanks for posting.

A truly intriguing story! An interesting way of getting rid of Tom. Would have liked to know about his children!