Hello again. For start, I couldn't enjoy well the epilogue because of a code error and the chapter looks very weird and hard to read. So if you can fix the error, please do it. I'll wait for it. See you

what the fuck did i just read

Thanks a lot for taking my ideas and making a proper ending. About your deviantart link, yes it seems interesting, you can send it to me whenever you want.

Btw, if you are looking for hot Pokemon stories, you can visit the profil of HarrisonTheScribe. He write very good oneshots and one of his long stories, "Turning a New Leaf", I helped him a lot with the chapters, specially with the epilogue. And in the OneShot Version, some chapters like "the Villa" were originally mine but I showed him the plots and he wrote them better.

See you soon mate

Hello, nice to see you again. I'm glad you decided to make a proper ending for this, after all, I was left with the desire of the RedxLeaf tale XD. I hope this to be a really good one. See you soon.

Hey. I think you should do a chapter for Sun and Moon

Hello again, sorry for taking me too long to leave a review but finally I can write one. So it's the end, this is really sad because I really enjoy your story and I don't think I can find another similar like this, your style is unique. Good luck in your future stories.

Before I leave, I have several things to tell you:
First, it's about the ending, I think it's a bit abrupt because we ended up with with just Calem's tale and not even a epilogue or something? Because I would have liked if the story will end with the guys opinion about which tale was better or even after they went to the tournament, they make a massive orgy with their lovers XD (this is obviously a crazy idea of mine). But relax, this is your story so you can finish it as you want.
Second, what happened to the RedxLeaf sextale that you promised? if it was discarded, then it's a shame because I really like this couple. I will not force you to make one just for me if you don't want.

This is all, thanks for this great story. See ya.

P.S: oh I almost forget, I don't know if you read the PM I sent you a time ago but in that message I explain why I can't publish my own stories and also explain that I never intended to write your own one, I'm really sorry if you felt that I was "stealing" your ideas.

The series was awesome! Interesting way to tell one shots, having all the protagonists gather together for a battle (but end up telling stories instead).

Speaking of which, do they start battling after this chapter? I think the battle should have at least been mentioned after Calem's story.

Whether an epilogue is written or not, good story, happy you didn't leave it!

(P.S. Where's Sun?)

Interesting stuff dude

You posted Ash and Misty again in the Brendan and May chapter.

Hello dude, thanks for update your story and gave us some nice chapters... Oh, and Happy New Year XD.
Now, I will start my opinion for each sex scenes: in the chapter of KrisxLyra, it was aceptable and well writen even though I don't watch lesbien sex very often. Btw, the idea of Kris having sex with a pokemon... well, personally I have always seen pokephilia very... disturbing, because it's the same as bestiality (sex with a animals). So I will never read a fanfic about pokephilia but you can still write one if you want but I wont be one of it's readers.

About the sex tale of Hilbert and Hilda, this was very good and when I imagined the sex scene... i got a erection XD. Also, I'll tell you something curious: I find a bit weird thinking in Hilda with large breast because in the fanarts, the mayority of them drawn Hilda flat-chested, rarely busty, and sometimes she gets jealous with the other girls (specially with Rosa because even in the official arts she is slightly bustier than Hilda even though she is younger XD)

And finally, about the possible RedxLeaf sex tale, I'll be waiting for the plans you have for them, but like I promised in my previous review, here is the other part of my plot ideas, enjoy:
When the guys asked Red why he and Leaf are so... "conservatives" in their sex live, he said, "the true is.. I don't want to hurt her because even though she is a really sweet, funny and attractive girl, internally she is a fragile girl. I remember when we were still kids, she was very shy and I somehow have a feeling that I should protect her at all cost, either from wild Pokemon or even Blue when he bullied her... Oh and when we became teens and stared dating, someday when we were sharing a kiss and because her petite body was curvier and bustier with the passing years... well, my hormones betrayed me and I touched her boob, she broke apart and covered her breast, I apologized but she said she was okey, only shocked. Despite that incident, I will never stop loving her because she is one of the few humans and not pokemons who was always by my side and she was the one who conviced me to leave Mount Silver and reunite with the people I love. She is everything to me".

When the guys were left speechless, Red said, "okey enough about stories, I think its time for the tounament, also I noticed all of your lovers are in the audience, I recomend you to get ready because you don't want to lose in front of your girlfriends, right?"

In the end, after epic battles and clashes wtih the legends, Red kept his status as the World Champion. Despite the others guys being sad for their defeat, specially the ones who lost in the first round, their girlfriends told them they loved for who they are and not for their winning rates. Meanwhile Red met with his wife Leaf who congratulated him with a hug and a kiss. She later said "Darling, i must tell you something important: I have been thinking in our relationship and also our stability in forming a family in the future, I reached the conclusión that... I think we are ready.. to have a baby". Red was surprised by this, he asked if she was sure, she nodded with a blush and he happily accepted it.

When the couple returned home, Red was lying in their large weeding bed, only wearing his boxers and asking how good sex because this was his first time, finally, Leaf entered the room wearing a sexy baby doll and it barely covers her glorious curves. Red was speechless, he was practically seeing a goddess. Leaf finally said, "Please enjoy each moment of this, because I'm going to do something exclusively and important for your eyes only and I'm no longer afraid. Here we go". She start to slowly undress while Red's penis become bigger each second...
Cliffhanger!

Sorry dude, but I need time to make the sex scene well described, so maybe next time. I'll be waiting for next chapters and I hope they are enjoyable like the others or even better. See you soon.

Story's pretty cool if ya think about it. Famous trainers telling sex stories. Silly, but interesting. Hope to read the next chapter when it comes out.

Don't get the wrong idea but who would have thought that when you review for a update, the author will do so inmediately? Thanks a lot. I personally don't know how large is a F-cup but I can imagine their size... almost like a beach ball (having a girlfriend like that, Nate you lucky bastard).
Btw, why did Hilbert pass his story to Red? Because Hilda isn't well endowed like the others' girlfriends? or because he is still a virgin XD.

About the next chapter about LyraxKris, I'm not accustomed to lesbian sex but I hope this will be good enough to worth it.

Another thing, I know it's hard to write a good story and sex scenes are not a exception but I can help, in fact, I have in mind a good chapter for this:
When the guys asked why Red is the unique who never had sex, they thought that he doesn't have a girlfriend or that he isn't interested but they were shocked when he told the true: "No, I don't have a girlfriend... but a wife" he explained them he and his wife (in this case is Leaf) married in secret to not get attention from the media and they made a vow that they will not have sex until they are a prepared to have children. After that, some asked if he at least can describe her beauty and he showed them a photo of her to let them judge: (it's a photo taken in the beach and she was accompanied by her Jiglypuff) she has long almost straight brown hair, blue eyes and a hourglass figure with C or D-cup and she had dark blue bikini which barely cover her curves. In conclusion: she was was one of the sexiest woman they had ever seen and caused the boys to blush and some of them to have a "bulge" between their pants which Red didn't like that they get excited with his wife.

Did you like my ideas? I'll tell you more details in another occasion. See you later
P.S: if you want to see the photo I mentioned before, you can use this link (even though she is Blue from the manga) :
. ?pagepost&sview&id2975404 page Gelbooru, credits goes to the artist Pokemoa, previously known as Soara. Warning: the page has links to porn pages

Hello dude, I have been following your story for months and I have been patiently waiting for the next update because I found this story very entertaining and hot, not to mention this is the first sex story I read with the protagonists of all the videogames (the heroxheroine couple are my favorites but I also liked EthanxWhitney) so please keep writing it and don't abandon it.

Backstreets back,alright!