Reviews for The Yajuu Sannin |
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![]() ![]() Start interesting . |
![]() ![]() Interesting. Hmm. If Naruto will learn the Flying thunder technique, firstly, he needs to improve his speed and endurance. That's what i thought. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story |
![]() ![]() Next chapter for Sasuke ? Thanks for this story. |
![]() ![]() Super chapter READ MORE ) |
![]() ![]() Nicely written and lots of fun. Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this chapter and cannot wait for the next one. So far so good, liking the progress of your story. Can't wait to meet other characters in your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the first chapter, it shows a lot of potential as does your writing. I can't wait to find out who Kitsune is. I hope that your story progresses at a good pace and you don't spend a lot of time in certain areas. |
![]() ![]() Yeah read more ! :) please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, you certainly know how to bait someone. You just throw out Naruto's opposite in most ways, including the information that he has whisker marks, and then we don't see much of him in the second chapter. I struggled not to pout when there wasn't more on Kitsune in this chapter. Either way, there isn't much to go on with what you've written so far, but I will wait and see if you're future chapters are as good as these two before reviewing again. Good luck with any future writing! |
![]() ![]() Good start . Read more please ;) Thanks |