thats not how the technique seal masters like minato and jiraiya use works, its like chakra forcably tattood into a surface that forms the seals its not some ink conversion think of how ridiculous that explanation sounds

why is he blond if hes an uzumaki, he better not be some strange brother of naruto

well damn thats a fun bit of lore to say hiashi was jiraiyas student very cool tho

makes sense that indra and ashuras reincarnations can read the scroll

yeah it seems extremely unlikely naruto would need 9 tails with all 3 fighting haku but i guess its fair being on a body of water would make him far more dangerous

this seems wildly more powerful then canon haku considering this team 7 has 3 usefull members and theyre much more highly trained then their canon counterparts were at this point

i dont think toad oil bullet is a jutsu non toad summoners can preform

please just call it protection of the 8 triagrams 64 palms

white fire is hotter then blue

be nice to see hinata have some homura swagger to her techniques

good organic way for him to learn the flying thunder god, its honestly probably not far off how minato learned the technique considering tobirama was long dead by that point and it wouldve only been possible to be a jutsu in the forbidden scroll which he wouldnt have access to till he was hokage

i am legit mad that you end this where you did. you pulled out some cool as hell moves that change the events from cannon drastically, it would have been glorious to read.

but, this has the same fate as a whole slew of fanfic, you write alongside cannon the whole time, then make a decision that forces the story away from cannon and it ends suddenly.

i dont know you, or any of the hundreds of other authors that have done the same thing, but it sure seems like you drop these stories because you cant handle the weight of so much changing, of having to write something that is more your own story.

its a damn shame too. i'd love to read whatever you plan to happen next, but i dont really expect it to get picked up.

Man, I forgot this ended at the best moment. I sincerely hope you pick this back up again, I've seen stories dropped for much longer that get continued.

Thats fair. He shouldve pushed harder is a good retort

Really good story so far. Any chance you'll pick it up again?