Great speech, but it all loses its meaning when he relies on the power of the fox, is literally the reincarnation of a demi-god and is DESTINED to fight the rabbit goddess. Kind of silly.
Anyway, the story was pretty good so far, but like 80% of the naruto fanfics here, it didn't even last until the end of the Suna invasion. It's just sad to read several of these arcs over and over again, and every time a good fic comes along, the author gives up. What a bore

Just stumbled across this again Looking for some thing to read in my favorite list. Still one of the best fan fictions in the Naruto fandom I’ve read and I have read thousands of fan fictions it’s just a shame it hasn’t been updated in almost 5 years one can only help the author will pick this back up. It has happened in the past

amazing work here but could you continue its been 4 years

Hey, this is an amazing story and I hope you can continue this in the future (no rush). If you did though, you can both post this here in and Ao3. Personally, Ao3 is an amazing website considering how it functions and how many people read there nowadays.

great story, hope you complete it soon

the fact that this fic hasnt been updated since 2019

not toadbad

I hope this presence isn't a oc we are tired of them

small chakra reserves doesn't result in good control

he didnt realized because he's a child genin

Quite enjoyed this. Can’t wait to see what happens with Hinata.

Well of course a summon related to foxes should be tied to the Kyuubi No Yoko its pratically the most Japanese Mythology thing they could pull not to mention original lore accurate. Also and I love the irony of this as I have never seen a fic get this right or even remember this fact as people just ignore this. But and I love pointing this out because so few fics do it right Naruto's original oneshot design was meant to originally be a young kitsune whose father attacked the village instead of killing the child the fourth hokage spares Naruto and raises this is lost and we get half assed versions of this which is why any time he gets fox summons I smile evilly and enjoy it. I smile even more when we get the rare fics that either make him a hanyou or a full fledged kitsune but that is just me. Though this is the first time someone has ignored a connection to the great Kyuubi no Yoko himself Kurama(Who has lately become my favorite character of Naruto). It would make sense but I get it your trying to be unique so I'll just enjoy the fact your using fox summons smiles evilly. I was going to leave but now your going to have to do something really annoying to get rid of me now that you have fox summons. Granted the only thing you could do is give Naruto a dojustu(So fucking sick and tired fo the dojustus being given special treatment and things like the Mokuton gets ignored even by the creator)

I am not trying to offend maybe its just me slowly beginning to find Naruto fanfics overall annoying yet for reasons I have not figured out I continue to read them(Please send help I am begining to fear demonic possession for some other such thing is the cause of this.) Why is it no one acknowledges that without the fox Naruto would have been dead a thousand times over? The only reason he ever manages to do anything is because in the end the Kyuubi No Yoko decides to take pity on him and help him. Though I do have to thank you you at least seem to understand this as you have made him the weakest out of the three which fits. Am interested to see how you have them interact because honestly I am hoping you have Naruto realize just how much he owes the fox rather than the aggravating and annoying to no end response of blaming the fox for everything.(Again something every fanfic and even cannon did which annoyed me to no end as again without the fox Naruto would have died several times in cannon)

Kinda feels like you might as well make Hinata the main character she has all the main character tropes. Because if you think seals trump her relation to Otsuki well gotta say I am laughing at the moment. However still amused because I am trying to see how your going to balance that your set with Sasuke though I hate admiting it because personally I despise the Dojusutu as they are overpowered and there is really nothing that equals them in this your free to prove me wrong and would enjoy it immensely if you did.

Is this going to update or will you put it up and let someone else to finish it