I absolutely love this story. It's everything I could possibly ask for from a fanfic. The characters are faithful and make sense, the plot is interesting and unique, the only complaint i have is that there's not more of it. I really, really hope this gets picked back up at some point and that it's not completely dead.

Holy sh#t the amount of emotions I went through while reading this was insane it started with "I don't care what they look like I will preach the gospel" to "sonofabi##h klan Templars" to "space na#is?" To "f##k covanet" to "Spartans what is your job description!" So love it so on to the next will update. As always this is the Fallen signing off *salutes* until next time God bless

obama? REALLY?

Would love to see this make a come back. Either way thank you for the great story and hard work. ill be sure to check your other works as well.

Ready, I reached the last written chapter and I loved it. I hope one day you can continue the story. I want to see you get Chief John 117 in trouble.

I've re-read this story more times than I care to admit, and every time I fall back in love with it. I think there's some really great writing and you have a great vision here. I hope that it is eventually continued and I look forward to that day!

Lieutenants don't refer to NCOs as 'sir'. Master Chief is great and all but he's very specifically an NCO (he's a Master Chief Petty Officer, hence the name) and while that rank has to be respected. (good officers listen to experienced NCOs), he is outranked by literally every officer.

This is probably the fourth time I re-read this story. The humor, the building up romance, the action, I love it! I hope you find the time and motivation to continue it soon.

Too many plotholes.
1. The humans open the relay but didn't sent a single scout ship or even a drone?
2. In this story, Shanxi should should at least be a military or research facility, with at least dozens of ships as guards, not population center, there is UNKNOWN alien artifact for god's sake.
3. Sending ground troops in the middle of enemy's controlled area is stupid military decision, they would be bombarded by enemy Anti Air armaments and interceptor-class ships.
4. Human military willing to stand down in front of aliens they thought of as Covenant? Seriously?
5. Monstergirls existence is irrelevant in the most important aspec of this story, Spaceships battles.
6. The word choice of Bullying, Kicking Ass, Peace, in the middle of thousands death? what the hell is wrong with this characters? are they psychos with zero empathy?

Amazing chapter and an incredible piece of writing. Very inspiring.

As someone who found your work awhile ago but have never left a review. Your work is astonishing for it captures what us humans can do against a overwhelming foe. It visually pictures a tale of monsterious creatures being amazed and afraid of us weak, timid beings. That we as a species knows no limits to what cruelity we will do to survive. I applaud you author.

That Codex entry is pure gold. Now I'm imagining the Panzer IV with the american short 90 and a .50 cal.

I like Dracosa; the understated personality. It's hard to justify why I'm drawn to the character, maybe it's the actions over words, or the way she treats everything so seriously. We don't know what's going on inside her head, or the way she's made peace with her past - if she has. She's sort of slotted into the place that Master Chief used to occupy in the games, a fearless badass who doesn't say much. With the MC needing to talk more to get things done, he doesn't feel like MC anymore - it's difficult to write a Halo story based around Master Chief, in that sense. None of his subordinates, squadmates or competitors fit into that role better than Draco.

I wanna see Sigma suplex a Krogan. : )

I love this story. Yeah, it hasn't gotten to the routinely promised sexy bits, but it really delivers on action and intrigue and you really fleshed out the world and its people and did a pretty fine job blending everything together. Absolutely love it. There's nothing like reading about cute monstergirls being badass as hell.
Chief's crew is interesting too.

Amazing work, glad to to have binged it. Looking forward to the next chapter!