Intense chapter. I like your Snape character...

Brilliant! One minor prblem...do you really think Malfoy senior would have given up Draco this easily...that Death Eater almost said Avada Kedavra...

Great!

It's amazing how obvious it is that you write seriously and not just for the heck of it...that you write also for the words not only the action. Delightful piece...I will get boring by the end of this...but I think I will leave a rewiev on each and every chapter that deserves it...

Excellent characters! Very well written...I don't know how much does appreciation from everyday mortals (non-writers) mean to you, but it was a very enjoyable chapter!

Gods, this story was good.

You've kept Neville entirely in character while giving him more importance. Most people would try to give him superpowers, wealth or lineage (to Gryffindor or Slytherin) to make him remarkable.

You've made him special just for being himself. One could sympathize with him throughout his adventure.

Most characters were in character, but Dumbledore seemed somewhat weak. I would hope he'd stupefy Fudge before he could get near Harry. But that problem was neatly solved by Dobby. Nice solution.

This is one of the stories that make it worth reading (skimming) through all the garbage you find floating around on the 'net.

Thank you.

Oh my goodness! This story is excellent. A rip-roaring ride the whole way through. I'm so glad that I came across this! It was adventure, mixed with teamwork, mixed with growing up, mixed with learning to take responsibility, mixed with... Oh my goodness! Just excellent!

What are you working on next?

Ah! SQUE!

Lol. Sorry for that brief moment of imcomprehension...ermm...*clears throat*

Suffice to say, I LOVED this story! Absolutely, ruddy, brilliant! Bravo!

I especially loved the teamwork that was going on between characters, such as the Hermione-Snape-Neville trio, and, back in the Hospital Wing, Draco and Ron. It was really awesome to see an unusual group of characters work together. Very refreshing.

Can't wait until your write another story.

Excellent work! Bravo! BRAVO!

pretty good plot you have there ) neville certainly has been used well for his talent, and i agree when you say that neville surely has some important part to play since he's a gryffindor. good job~

hey i like ur story

Brilliant! This fanfiction seems very thought out and well written. I love it.

hey, cool story, a long wait, but well worth it. you know you are the first author I've read who gave Neville credit for saving the day. A good read.

2am in the morning so I won't make too long of a post lest I start making sense.

Great story, I enjoyed it very much. I especially liked the bits of humour that lightened up an otherwise dark mood. Well done!

NO!

Don't line up your new story with Canon. I'd prefer it if one event in canon definitely doesn't occur, it was heartbreaking, depressing and just plain AWFUL!

Please?

On a more positive note, loved this story so much...I remember a while ago I emailed you begging you to carry it on because you hadn't updated in months and months. So glad you did, and I'm so happy that you've finished it. Well done.

Well, yeah, not only that, he was also a BWL candidate! That's bound to count for something... In a way, he's braver than the Golden Trio. Look at the way he stood up to them, was it in first year, when they were sneaking out! Courage isn't a lack of fear, it's being afraid and doin it anyway _ Great story all round, this is going (in fact, has gone) straight to my community for completed HP epics!

its morsmorde and it is called the dark mark