A great story!
I love how you portryed Ron and Draco. And the ending is perfect, with the cure for Neville's parents :D

I just somehow happened upon this story and I really enjoyed it. I loved the whole concept and liked your characterizations as well. Good job... well done!

Yay! This was awesome, and thank u some much for such an awesome story! Thanks and peace! Bye!

Love the story you outdid youself with this ine

I liked it. Happy to see Neville a hero in his way, you know with plants and such. Good job, excellant writing and a very orginal story. Thanks!

Yay Neville! About time somebody found the Gryffindor in him.
I think it is a great story and I forgive you for making Severus less powerful than he was in canon. After all you didn't know that yet when you wrote this.

Great story so far. Love the idea with the secret room and that Ron is stepping up to the plate to guard Harry from his relatives.

hello, dear. it is 22 minutes after midnight for me. I've been reading your fic for around 2 days. I really enjoyed it. The story-telling is enjoyable, the plot is well constructed. I liked that you had raised curiosity and questions about the importance of some part (for example neville's lost, and the finding of the flower.) and then only answering for htese questions later. This delay made the reading really enjoyable for me,, because this way I didn't have a feeling of that like 'hey, how """unexpected"""" that when there is no hope, Neville finds az extinct plant that noone had seen 100 years ago and the cure is found out just so easy' :P Your plot gave reason even to the seemingly unimportant parts, which I really loved!
oh, and my other favourite: SNAPE! His style and humour.. and when Neville and he were talking innocently about Hermione's skateing skills. That was priceless! And when even Neville and Hermione told Snape off. Or Draco's behaviour.. That I liked also. Typically Slytherin, but kind and loveable. Ooo, and before I forget it: the egg-like sceen in which Harry was relived, that also was a good way of solving things. I liked the atmosphere of that part, the caring ot the caracters, and my own impatience caused by your story.
Thank you, for letting me read your lovely fanfiction!
Should you wish to aswer me, I find out how to log in and make my account visible( I'm proud:D:D):)

I hope that I managed to write a valuable critic/feedback in exchange for the fun that you gave me, since I didn't give any feedback during reading.
I'we been writing for 20 minutes... totally tired... i should shut up maybe. :D
I wish you everything nice and good that you would wish for yourself! Take care, have good inspiration!:)

Erm, it's Dark Mark, not Death Mark.
And the incantation for it is Morsmordre, not Voldesmorde.

This was a great story! I really lie how Neville wasn't portrayed as the "suddenly cool wing-man" of Harry's, or the "awkward shy little boy" like he is in many stories. The way you described the adventure in the "jungle" was really cool. I can't wait to read more of your work.

Brilliant!

YAY NEVILLE! About time he got some regognition! Fantastically written and Snape had me in stitches. Brilliant!

It won't work. The kid is not super, he's not extremely powerful, he's just average.

Cannon proves that it's luck, and the people around him, not to mention the way that things always work out, that save his bacon.

Must have sucked a bunch of his magic because the guy is insanely powerful. And come one dude, don't tell me that he fucked up the heat of the cauldron because his magic is 'wonkey' the flame is not magic I believe and if it was it's still too first year of a spell to fuck up for a man of his skill and power.

And he didn't do the shield correctly? lame. The cannon Snape would have no problem defending and keeping that shield up even with depleted magic.

And he's a one in a million potion master. He would not fuck that potion up. Why is he so toned down skill wise and intelligence wise in this story?

But Snape is comming off as less intelligent then his cannon counterpart. Am I to believe that a potions master, one of such immense intelligence, power, and skill, would know so little of plants?

I mean come on this dude is supposed to be super powerful. In cannon he's smarter then Hermonie and would not only know what do do in this situation but what they are dealing with.

As amazing as the story is, I loath it when I am reading a good story and it is ruined by a weak and stupid Snape.

Snape could just summon his wand himself. He can do many spells, combative and non combative without a wand and wordless as well but since this was written in 2003, I don't think I can bitch. Seeing as you couldn't know that.