What a great adventure story! I'm so glad I found it. The writing just flows along and I really enjoy reading a story that isn't your usual generic romance/angst tale. This is simply a 'good time' read featuring a tremendously fun characterization of my favorite potions master! I'm also really enjoying your Draco and the inclusion of Neville- and all of the rest of the crew, of course! Thanks so much for writing this- I'll be following it through to the end!

this is a wonderful story, can't wait for more

Nice to know you're still alive. *Chunks Plane Tickets* Was worried you know... *Puts up gun* anyways once you feel up to snuff update.

Feel better. and get the next bit out soon. I love this story. It's much fun.

~Aurumlupi

WAHO! Updates! Okay, after reading your list of reasons, I forgive you. Quite easily in fact. Laryngitis is NOT fun at all. _

My my, the cats were CREEPY indeed. O_o

Very well writtern story! Please update again SOON! This is incredibly GOOD! _ I LOVE it!

grins. Poor Snape. I loved the line about Gryffindors. Oh and I am sorry tohear about your voice. I have only had laryngitis once and it was only for a few days but it was no fun. Snd yes real life can be a pain so no worries on finding time. We know you'll get to it when you can. And I hope you feel better.

Keep up the awesome work. _~

giggles some more about Snape possibly becoming a squib. ..

Please, please write more! It's soo good!

Vulcan. cool. is the plant going through pon farr then?

Wow! What a fantastic story! I can't wait to see what happens next!

You have an uncanny use of imagry! I could see the garden, the chamber, etc. clearly as I reading, and it was especially good when Harry got hit and Snape held him in his arms. You did a fabulous job of conveying the disbelief/sorrow/inner division Snape felt and the irony of the situation when he refused to let Hagrid take Harry from him. I also love what you are doing with Malfoy. Excellent, excellent!

My only suggestions are:

-In Chapter 14, I didn't realize they were using a rope to cross the fire pit until Snape got to the other side. Perhaps the rope could be mentioned earlier?

-One thing that's not clear to me is why Herminoe, Snape and Neville didn't just go in the back way, where Neville fell out in the beginning of the story.

This is such a good story, and I eagerly anticipate the next chapters! Keep up the good work!

Very touching and emotional story;) The describtion of Harry is a bit -too- freaky, no? XD Freaked me oput at any rate:P Good job over all, hope you post the next chapter soon!

Oh, this is a good story! Please, let them get Dawn's Glory soon! And make sure Harry doesn't go to St. Mungo's. Me and some other readers would die probably!

WOOP! very nice! although im curious to 1) harrys condition, 2) what draco did to harrys relative and 3) whats going to happen next... update fast and swift!

Continue!

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Cheers,

Headmaster Cromwell

very interesting ...

like the way you keep true to the characters .. very difficult to find in fan fictions!

you're definately on my "favorite stories" list!