Reviews for A Gryffindor Tried and True |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very good. Can't wait for more. It's written well enough to make a great plot flow and not a chore to read. (I'm not an expert or anything, just my opinon) But that's what makes a great story in my opinon. Keep the chapters coming. We've still got a long wait until book 5. |
![]() ![]() A Giffindor Tried and True- This is looking to be one of the most interesting fanfictions I have ever read. The conflicts are very real and believable. Your action scenes are skillfully written; not many writers have the ability to incorperate suspense with action. (good job!) No one has broken character- Snape, Harry, and Draco inparticular. Snape is also a difficult character to write a fanfiction with because there is so little known abot him, yet so many possibilities. But, you haven't fallen into the trap that many do. You've kept up Snape's sneering sarcasm and overprotective nature to his students. The little elaboration on his character that have been made (worrying about Neville, and being there the night of the Longbottom attack) are plausible and well crafted. :) And... the part where Neville reveals he wasn't lost, and that he 'did it all by himself' completely hooks your readers. (or at least me. lol) The mystery of Neville is intriguing, and you've peaked the readers curiosity. I like how you're portraying him. There's definately more to Neville that meets the eye; I can't wait for you to show what he is really made of! Keep writing! Must read more! lol ~ Jade |
![]() ![]() That was really good. Please contunue writing, I am very interested in what happens next. Will Snape be the same mean person that he has always been, or will we see a nicer side come out because of this? |
![]() ![]() Oooooooh Please continue! This is excellent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please keep going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute update soon |