|Reviews for Oh, Merciful Hunter|
| edoabb chapter 2 . 3/12/2022
Golden trio? Did they just replace Harry? Moreover I get that this is supposed to be a war torn world that has been suffering from years of Voldemort going around, but then why don't we see any repercussions? The only thing is that the people are weary... Wow
| Aratherfluffyfatcat chapter 5 . 10/15/2021
Enjoying the story thanks
| APridefulSin chapter 5 . 7/11/2021
golden amazing thank you
| Seprith Li Castia chapter 4 . 2/1/2021
Short, but I rather like this idea. The concept of a silent bell hanging at Hogwarts' entrance, ever tempting yet absolute. An inspired creation.
| Seth A. Mincberg chapter 5 . 8/31/2020
| dylansandy1993 chapter 5 . 5/2/2020
I've read this twice. Still love it.
It's such a fun retelling of the two franchises (three) that I can't help but chuckle reading it. I do wish that certain characters who rung the bell had been singled out . such as the first or the last in Dumbledore's time.
| sondrex76 chapter 3 . 6/14/2019
I found a few potential misspellings and such:
"WAs it not her generation's duty " - "Was it not her generation's duty "
" rely on summoning who could be " - " rely on summoning someone who could be "
"as well been the cause of latest" - "as well as been the cause of the latest"
" one her junior" - " one of her junior"
" sides of war as a miracle hand," - " sides of the war as a miracle hand,"
"view Harry was a person after" - "view Harry as a person after"
"as both pro and a con, " - "as both a pro and a con, "
"eloquent of individual," - "eloquent of individuals,"
"had been at the living room" - "had been in the living room"
"d to the his Nightmare and pondered." - "d to his Nightmare and pondered."
"She was youngest of his " - "She was the youngest of his "
"It's been weeks" - "It'd been weeks"
" exactly what I would traded " - " exactly what I would have traded "
"aw a figure walked up to where" - "aw a figure who walked up to where"
"ut leather trench coat" - "ut a leather trench coat"
"not if, decides to run the city down for heres" who is going to do it is not specified
" which these creatures seem to seek not " - " which these creatures seemed to seek not "
"The word will spread, regardless of facts, and it will dissuade " - "The word would spread, regardless of facts, and it would dissuade "
"for all to wish to ring the bell:" - "for all who wish to ring the bell:"
"because their mind" - "because their minds"
"But every then and now" - "But every now and then"
" a danger to wizarding world." - " a danger to the wizarding world."
"Thsoe who tried were" - "Those who tried were"
"surrounding; if there " - "surroundings; if there "
Thanks for writing and have a nice day.
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/13/2018
While the recursion of a Saito who's already been through ZoT is indeed interesting.
I think that if local Louise had summoned one of her counterparts a la "The Hunter" by "Arawn D. Draven", then it would've dialled up the mind screwery up to Lovegood level.
Facing an older, taller and far more dangerous version of herself. One possibly trained in Terran Magic by "Harry" to offset the flaws in her native system.
Goldfish looks all abound and that would be prior to her actual transformation.
| Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 5 . 8/21/2018
| TheAutarch chapter 5 . 5/5/2018
Laughed so hard at this chapter would love to know how it ends up
| TheAutarch chapter 1 . 5/5/2018
Yeas the story i have been looking for
| Leblanc23 chapter 5 . 4/1/2018
that got ill admit it.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2018
...Dumbledore is literally, canonically gay.
| Exiled Soul Nomad chapter 5 . 6/19/2017
I loved that ending.
| Dustier7 chapter 5 . 4/25/2017
Poor poor Louise, she can never have a break xD. I wonder what'll happen next!?